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A River Folds

A river folds upon its banks with waters deep and cold. Its molten flow rolls endlessly from aquifers untold. It ripples over ancient stones placed when the earth was cast. Each sheared and formed the bedrock's course 'neath outflows bold and fast. Swift currents know of time's slow ebb, and legends never told. Its surface gleams beneath the sun of sagas being scrolled. The sky above has seen the work of time's artistic hand, and knows the melding and the strength of water and the land. An ancient bending vein of life connected with the wold, that shields enigmas deep as time in runnels which enfold. Roll on past hill and fertile land 'til deltas cease your course. The river and the woodlands speak of life's primordial source. Nov. 2014 Common Verse

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Date: 2/11/2016 10:46:00 AM
This beautifully detailed the pure majesty at work. I thoroughly enjoyed the flow, and descriptive word choices. Nicely done!
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/19/2016 6:09:00 AM
Sorry I didn't reply sooner, S. I appreciate your comments. Very encouraging. I like some of the poems I have written about rivers, creeks or moving waters. Thanks again for your encouragment.
Date: 2/11/2016 8:13:00 AM
lovely picture painted here Brian, lovely rhyme too, well done!
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/19/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thanks for reading, commenting, and giving me encouragement. Be Blessed.
Date: 2/9/2016 2:51:00 PM
enjoyed reading this poem paints a picture
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Date: 2/9/2016 7:09:00 AM
Greetings Brian. Congrats for having your piece featured in the poetry soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:15:00 AM
such a lovely piece Brian, you pen this so well bringing me memories of being brought up in the country, real nice!
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/19/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting. I forgot it was up on the Soup. It is encouraging to me!

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