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A Price To High

With tears streaming down her face A mother sits staring at a framed picture Of a young man who answered the call Wondering… Why my son? ...Why my son? A young boy wearing a U.S. Army cap Valiantly tries to fend off a storm of emotion. Overtaken by grief he succumbs to the pain. A down pour of tears flood his once innocent face As he wrestles with the heart wrenching reality Of his mom never returning home. A tiny little girl pulls on the dress Of a trembling teary eyed lady dressed in black Standing next to a flag draped coffin Asking… Where’s daddy mommy? …Where’s daddy? A proud Vietnam War veteran With tears steadily filling his eyes And a crippling wound to his heart Shakily stands up on one prosthetic limb To offer one final salute to his fallen son With a hand above his brow he utters the words: A price to high Semper Fi.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/29/2014 8:40:00 PM
I liked this. I wrote a few similar to it: Every Veteran's A Casualty, One Out Of Three, and maybe another. You might like them. SSG Mark Halliday (US Army Retired) AKA WarriorPoet
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2014 3:26:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 4/28/2014 6:28:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Kim
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Kim Morrison
Date: 4/28/2014 7:58:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/16/2013 7:14:00 PM
Wow...what an impact. These different poignant scenarios moved me as well. War. What sadness and grief war has brought on every generation. Nicely written once again. Always, Laura
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Kim Morrison
Date: 4/28/2014 7:59:00 PM
Thank You Laura!
Date: 4/16/2013 5:33:00 PM
A very sad and heartfelt poem Kim, the imagery moved me, very deep. ~*~SKAT
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Kim Morrison
Date: 4/28/2014 7:59:00 PM
Thank You Skat!

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