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A Poem of the Seashore

A Poem of the Seashore For Lynn A poem of the seashore; would you write one for me of the shells and sliding sand? All I see is horizon releasing the moon from a European land. Behind in the east there's a whisper so slight from a place of seedling sun: "Why do you stand at the brink of night with dreams that may not come"? "Count on my light of daily routine, obvious, safe, in tune." I can't; I can't; there's more to be had from the place of the rising moon. I was born in the gloaming of ocean surf at the brink of my dreams at the edge of the earth. ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins January 8, 2013

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Date: 8/27/2013 11:14:00 PM
Very good Kathy. I liked this poem.I think the third stanza is a quotable quote with a little tweaking. If I had one suggestion, It would be to make the last stanza the first. Thanks for an enjoyable read. Rockman :-)
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Date: 8/27/2013 11:17:00 PM
Sorry. I meant to say make the last stanza the second. I hate when I don't proof read. :-)
Date: 8/8/2013 10:39:00 AM
love the imagery Kathy a fine write (7) Shadow x smiles
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Date: 2/22/2013 5:49:00 PM
I am mesmerized by your imagery and phrasing, '...shells and sliding sand,' '...at the brink of my dreams at the edge of the earth,' a breathtaking piece so well conceived. With love, Keith
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Date: 1/19/2013 9:54:00 AM
Dear Kathy, I've already read this twice in the last week or so... So maybe I should comment now... the sight of the sea at sundown/sunup (or even 'just' the thought of it) I find so inspiring/enthralling (what's the right word?)... love your imagery of all (sun, sea, moon...) and the notion of 'potential'... Love Terry
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:18:00 PM
Love the way you rhymed this,,, from the place of the rising moon, ;} have a great day Kathy ;}
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Date: 1/13/2013 11:05:00 PM
Oh Kathy I so truly love this one! The gloaming owns me utterly and its denial that it can ...surprised and thrilled me...with the push n pull as if the tide
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:27:00 PM
What a neat conversation between the sun and the moon, both haqve their magic but i TEND TO SIDE WITH THE MOON. I had to read it again! Love, Lizzie
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Date: 1/8/2013 2:13:00 PM
Breathtaking, my friend...the last two verses absolutely floored me - Tim
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