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A Novel Obsession

tap of nails, slide wood, pull drapes stains loiter in round mug shapes water sipped, books stack, words leap hush wizened pages, neighbors sleep journals, confessionals, down or up old cartridge spills, pens horde in cup shackled hands, lungs breathe, heart drums an empty tissue box, lamp hums Try, stay busy, must forget One more read, she might regret mordacious night, she wakes from sleep her bursting thoughts alone must keep pack nightstand, smooth trifle snags slip his book in its carry-on bag His words elicit songs in ear from his masterpiece, held dear open drawer, last book in pile bottom of the heap, exiled giving in, she dares to rest his hard cover on her chest remove jacket, ne’er oppress dust off passion and caress thumb his chapters, breathe him in recite his name and notes again too much cologne, too much sweat open pages, fan her breast She knows he does not write for her emotions shatter, dreams endure she scribbles margins in duress between his lines, her discontent the nightstand drawer hides her distress she’s indexed under “o”, obsessed Written 4/4/17 for Eight Word Challenge Contest

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Date: 5/24/2020 12:49:00 PM
I was pulled from the very first line...a beautiful write. Congratulations on your top win!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/25/2020 10:09:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne!!
Date: 3/30/2019 2:44:00 PM
Beautifully done. I can her imagine going from place to place recounting her time in sadness.
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Date: 8/6/2017 10:52:00 AM
Fantastic write...truly fantastic, Rhonda - Top marks! I thought it was time to call round and inquire to as how you are - Well I hope! My very warmest regards Rhonda. :) john P.s This deserves to be published!
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Date: 5/5/2017 12:20:00 AM
This poem kept me spellbound Rhonda. Amazing how each line with two or three words felt so comfortable with the rest. I love this style. Is this a creation of yours Rhonda? I am not familiar with it. It makes quite an evocative impact! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/1/2017 9:49:00 PM
Such delicious poetry Rhonda :)
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Date: 4/22/2017 3:52:00 AM
Another brilliant write by the master. A Fav. Lots Of Love always, hope you and yours are doing well.
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Date: 4/9/2017 1:44:00 PM
For poetic style and content this is the winner, unfortunately for this contest a little long, shorter would have placed higher, but I could not ignore this masterpiece!
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Date: 4/5/2017 6:34:00 PM
What a feverish read!!! Enjoyed it all.
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Date: 4/5/2017 5:40:00 PM
Wow Rhonda, wow. I actually forgot I was reading altogether as I got lost in this amazing poem. Your words just pulled me into the world you have created and I wandered around spellbound the entire time. I felt like I was watching a movie. This was so good and if this doesn't win that contest, then I will be extremely disappointed. Really well done my friend.
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