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A Night For Jesus As Well

Rudolph and Santa saw the Christmas star, they knew not what it was ‘til stardust fell- snow-capped pines whisper to them from afar that Christmas Eve was for Jesus as well. They knew not what it was ‘til stardust fell, though they felt that it was the one true night that Christmas Eve was for Jesus as well! They gazed at the utmost resplendent sight. Though they felt that it was the one true night God birthed the most lovely baby Jesus, they gazed at the utmost resplendent sight; for they know that He’s the one that frees us. God birthed the most lovely baby Jesus o’er the hillside encompassed by white drift- for they know that He’s the one that frees us, for this night of wonder is a true gift. O’er the hillside encompassed by white drift, the two of them decide it’s time to fly- for this night of wonder is a true gift, seeing proud parents sing a lullaby. The two of them decide it’s time to fly. Snow-capped pines whisper to them from afar- seeing proud parents sing a lullaby… Rudolph and Santa saw the Christmas star. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Picture #3 1.20.20 Christmas Pantoum Rhyme Poetry Contest Eve Roper

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Date: 1/26/2020 12:54:00 AM
Gratulation’s on your wonderful 1st Place win combining the birth of Jesus with Santa Luloo. xxoo
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Date: 1/25/2020 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Laura. I want to thank you for entering my contest. Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme , and imagery.I also like how you spilt the repeated lines, it made easier to check. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/22/2020 7:38:00 AM
What a wonderful way to express the Christmas Story. A beautifully crafted piece. I think you just made the Nice List!
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Date: 1/20/2020 3:34:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Lu, and beautiful picture as well! Best to you for 2020 and all ensuing years to follow - Bob H
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