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A Moment of Joy

It was a dull and lifeless day of brown and gray I'd walked around until I found A little flower all alone in beauty grown which caught my eye as I passed by The color I was blessed to see had lifted me and as it grew my spirit flew *Minute Poem - See A plea For Spring for full description

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2012 3:54:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 10/6/2011 2:21:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “What A Very, Sweet & Lovely Verse My Dear Precious Robin! *^_^* I Am Somewhat New To This PoetrySoups Place & Was Just Strolling Through Its Members Section & Found Your Beauties Pretty Name So Thought That I Would Drop In For A Quick Visit, My Dear *^_^* Love The Ending & Love The Flower *^_^* Ahhhh!” === My Love to You, Jasper *
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:16:00 AM
such a nice write
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Date: 8/12/2009 9:21:00 AM
And so beautiful may I add. Thank you for sharing this oneRobin. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:09:00 AM
You are worthy of the company of Wordsworth ... what a great writer you are ... the detail in every essence brings happiness to the reader ... a beautiful poem too.
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:23:00 PM
thanks for the flowers we meet on our dull days,thanks for people like you,flowers !who brighten our days with poetry-charma
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:33:00 AM
Love those crocus! Light & Love
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:41:00 AM
Well constructed and rhymed! Neat 8444 meter with a lovely message... Well done Robin! Blessings and hugs, Keith
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Date: 4/1/2009 12:36:00 AM
Hi Robin thanks for your welcome comments on my Yellowstone series today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/31/2009 8:00:00 PM
Beautiful reflection on finding beauty on a "dull and lifeless day." Magnificently uplifting, Robin. I'll be sending you a Soup Mail shortly. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:52:00 PM
...."the color I was blessed to see had lifted me~and as it grew my spirit flew"~Smile, so very tenderly sweet!!!:):) I wonder what color it was? I bet it was a color more beautiful than any eyes have ever seen before?!:):) Perhaps, "The Color of 'You!!!'":):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To You Robin, And All Whom 'You' Love, Forever, John!!!"~Sweet Dreams Tonight Dear Lady~Bye!:):)~"Beautiful Poem!!!":):)
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:44:00 PM
Smile~How did I miss this yesterday?~"Hello Beautiful & Precious Robin!!!":) I truly hope that You had a very bright & lovely day today dear gifted lady!:) And what a precious write that this is!:) It always makes my heart soo very happy~When I see "Your Priceless Heart & Soul Happy Dear!!!":):)....cont....
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:33:00 PM
lovely sweet poem-charma
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Date: 3/31/2009 1:35:00 PM
sweet jus sweet!..I love it and the second stanza is my fave as well...absolutely adorable poem...nice work!..Maryam~~
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:43:00 PM
Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. What a day brightener. Blessings to you for sharing your thoughts with us. Thank you for the kind comment on my poem. Karen
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:26:00 PM
love this little write Robin. Reminds me of a thought I had the other day about a little dandelion growing out of a crack in a sidewalk and no other flowers in sight. Why the thought crossed my mind I have no idea...lol.
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:21:00 AM
Dear Robin, SOUP Mail Call
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:48:00 AM
Robin where I live in South Texas, roses are blooming trees are all leafing out, birds are singing. It is truly God's time to shine. It is by far my favorite time of the year. God Bless my friend, Ron
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:47:00 AM
Dear Robin, I read "A Plea For Spring" and can see this great form Both POEMS very well done YOU have gripped my Soul with YOUR POETIC Genius ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:07:00 AM
So much sweetness and grace in this poem, Robin. Lovely work! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:20:00 AM
This is such a lovely poetry form. Finding the colorful beauty flower among the gray and brown, reminds me of part of an amazing book I read. Such an uplifting write. There is beauty everywhere, sometime we just need to look. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:31:00 AM
A beautiful as is moment Robin..Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/31/2009 1:13:00 AM
A " Royal " moment of rhyming joy at the palace gardens , QR ....
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:56:00 PM
Sweet, there are moments of rapture everywhere this time of year. BG
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:13:00 PM
Robin AH nothing like spring to lift the mood! Wonderful poem! Laura :)
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