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This soul must yield to a Master's hand At path's end, with toil endured Destined worth, its truth assured As winters frost nips at the rose Shorn from time, as cold winds blow This soul must yield to a Master's hand With source of light that guides my way Beyond these shrouds before me lay A peace, nor I could understand This soul found hope with a Master's hand Such repose within this heart I felt With veneration, my will has knelt The warmth of spring doth fill the air As only one could answer prayer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/16/2018 5:17:00 PM
A beautiful and inspiring poem, Charlie. Well done! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/13/2018 7:43:00 AM
Very beautiful and inspiring, Charlie; great poetry!
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Date: 2/13/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Joe...
Date: 12/21/2017 11:02:00 AM
Good Work! Mike Reed
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Date: 12/21/2017 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Mike...
Date: 12/10/2017 5:58:00 PM
Lovely spiritual write Charlie well done!
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Date: 12/11/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so much John...
Date: 12/2/2017 7:08:00 PM
Wonderful write Charlie! Faith is a warm and wondrous thing... and you capture it well :) Have great day
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Date: 12/3/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thank you Chris...
Date: 12/1/2017 9:05:00 PM
This is very beautiful, Charlie. I really like it.
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Date: 12/1/2017 12:07:00 PM
Beautifully written Charlie
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Date: 12/3/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thank you Joseph...
Date: 11/30/2017 12:21:00 PM
Gorgeous deep ink Charlie xomo
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Date: 12/1/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Maureen...
Date: 11/30/2017 9:01:00 AM
A Masters hand you have Charlie...great spiritual write my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/30/2017 11:56:00 AM
Peace be with you WW...
Date: 11/29/2017 2:45:00 PM
this is a very lovely spiritual poem, Charlie.
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Date: 11/30/2017 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 11/29/2017 6:03:00 AM
Charlie, Truth paints your poetic revelation! Healing is presented by a wounded hand. God bless you!
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Date: 11/29/2017 1:43:00 PM
Peace be with you Chuck, thank you...,
Date: 11/28/2017 1:09:00 PM
Your lovely poem enriches us with hope and faith Charlie. Your poems always inspire me. A wonderful Yuletide blessing! I love it! : )
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Date: 11/28/2017 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Connie, and blessings to you and your family this holiday season...
Date: 11/27/2017 6:28:00 PM
Just beautiful - and hopeful, Charlie!!!
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite...
Date: 11/27/2017 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful and contemplative poem!
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Arthur...
Date: 11/27/2017 4:57:00 PM
So true my friend...All the best to you Charlie...
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:23:00 PM
And to you Arturo, thanks...
Date: 11/27/2017 3:27:00 PM
Oh I love this one Charlie. A favorite for me :) Very well written!
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Heidi...
Date: 11/27/2017 3:26:00 PM
A lovely sonnet! Yes, indeed, yield to the Master’s hand!
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Kim...
Date: 11/27/2017 3:17:00 PM
This could be a sonnet... Excellent rhyme and flow..
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:22:00 PM
Could be but I really didn't plan it that way, thanks SO...
Date: 11/27/2017 3:07:00 PM
A beautiful rhythmic depiction--love the flow--well written, Charlie!
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...

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