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A Lover's Lament- Collaboration With Paul Callus

A Lover’s Lament (Paul Callus & Redfiery ( smriti Jha) ~ 2017) A LOVER'S Lament Summer took its toll, Dried up the waters of our love. We found ourselves stranded On the arid river bed Dreaming of encroaching clouds. We thirsted for the promise of rain And love’s reincarnation. Rough winds carried away all hopes Storm took away what we had We pined for winter's warmth But our frozen heart bled without love. The spring never arrived As dead leaves turned into ashes We returned to our meet, our fate. Alas! Summer took its toll. Copyright @2017 by Paul Callus& Redfiery ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Date: 11/8/2017 9:18:00 AM
Creative work..Enjoyed reading the lovers' lament..Thanks for the trip to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2017 12:38:00 PM
Wow red Fiery and Paul you have written a super collaboration sadness leaps from every line:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2017 10:20:00 AM
Good as gold you two...missed your writes
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Red Fiery
Date: 10/26/2017 11:02:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/22/2017 10:49:00 PM
This is excellent, great collab!
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Red Fiery
Date: 10/26/2017 11:03:00 AM
Thanks a lot !
Date: 10/18/2017 3:09:00 PM
Excellent collaboration.. I like how the poem flows..
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Date: 10/18/2017 12:52:00 PM
A piercing pen! Wonderful xomo x2
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Date: 10/18/2017 12:39:00 PM
Hi Smriti! I'm pleased to be the first one to comment on this poem. Always a pleasure to write with you...thank you! Warm regards // paul
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