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A Love Song In Moonlight

I wrote a song for you one night, and sang to stars in merry mood. It warbled with the birds in flight, then, hummed a breezy interlude. My lyrics floated to gold moon, who asked, “can this sweet song be shared with the dear one for whom you croon so tenderly as love’s declared?” I thought of your embrace upon A full moon’s glow if love were true. I also thought of anguished dawn if clouds kept light from breaking through. By refrain’s end, my choice was clear. With guiding light from sprightly sky, I sang of love into your ear, and to gold moon we dared to fly. I wonder now, “why did I fear feelings that moonlight did expose?” Rejection stings but worse is years alone and bitter in shadows. So, thanks to my friend, golden moon, enlightened orb of rhythmic art, my song lifted like a balloon and landed in a waiting heart. 6/30/20 Contest - Strand Completely New Sponsor - Brian Strand

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Date: 6/30/2020 9:08:00 PM
Penultimate stanza really speaks to me. Thanks, Rhonda! ~ MITM (Man in the Moon)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:31:00 PM
Thanks, to you and the Man in the Moon! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hugs, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/30/2020 2:52:00 PM
The moon has inspired so many artists ... That's a beautiful love song you have expressed ..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! Yes, the night sky and ocean are probably my greatest poetic inspirations. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/30/2020 2:06:00 PM
Nicely done! Aloha! Rico
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:28:00 PM
Thank you, Rico. Blessings and hugs, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/30/2020 1:00:00 PM
The moon is a great inspiration for poets, you've been well inspired Rhonda. Tom
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:27:00 PM
Thanks, Tom! Now, I'm trying to get inspired to be a star. Blessings and hugs, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/30/2020 11:54:00 AM
Beautifully done quatrain, Rhonda. Lovely, Panagiota
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:26:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. You are always so kind! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/30/2020 11:27:00 AM
I really enjoyed this sweet little lilt, Rhonda. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 10:25:00 PM
Thanks, John! Every now and then I need to lighten up a little. Blessings, Rhonda xx

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