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A Lasting Gift

My Uncle Aaron, now deceased, Once brought me, as a gift, A game with marbles called Hi-Q, Which gave me quite a lift. The base is made of pottery. It’s circular in style And sits out in my living room; I think of him and smile. I haven’t played in years, although It’s challenging and fun. You jump the marbles, hoping that You’ll end with only one. That never happens, but last night, My grandkids tried and tried. I watched them play and all I felt Was happiness inside. How lovely when connections flow From generations past. We never know what will live on From dies that we have cast.

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Date: 12/29/2023 2:47:00 PM
what wonderful memories and I am sure you had a lump in your throat seeing the grandchildren playing with this treasured toy:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2023 8:51:00 AM
I enjoyed this light read.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/29/2023 3:17:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 12/27/2023 10:07:00 PM
so touching memories to share, your uncle was a good person, i think, enoyed my reading
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/29/2023 3:17:00 AM
Yes, he was! Thanks you, Yann!
Date: 12/27/2023 11:02:00 AM
Not just a game but something you hold dear to your heart Ilene, now more happy memories are being created. Happy New year to you. Tom
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/29/2023 3:18:00 AM
Happy New Year to you, too, Tom! Thanks for stopping by…
Date: 12/27/2023 7:34:00 AM
Ilene, your poem is a heartwarming treasure. The simple Hi-Q transcends generations, a bridge between laughter and memory. You've captured the essence of legacy in a way that's both tender and joyful. Bravo! - Daniel
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/29/2023 3:19:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely comment, Daniel! Much appreciated…

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