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A Kiss of Sunshine

Each evening the moon waits patiently hidden in the sky For the sun to say its final good bye As round and round again we ago The moon receives its daily kiss of sunshine Light as a lover's kiss, careful not to bruise Sun kisses moon just enough to bring Magic to night time and stars above With sunrise, moon once again slips away Awaiting patiently for tomorrows kiss of sunshine ©Donna Jones

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/19/2016 11:32:00 AM

From mystery to daily to mystery. A regular dream trip. Congrats. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2013 9:49:00 PM

awe, this is a very nice and lovely win... always~ Linda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/27/2013 4:27:00 AM

Congratulation Donna lots of sunshine coming our way xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2013 4:09:00 PM

congrats on a great win Donna

Donna Jones
Date: 3/26/2013 5:46:00 PM

Much appreciated Joseph .. Donna

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/26/2013 11:41:00 AM

I am SO glad to see you winning contests my friend!...3rd verse is an absolute knockout - Tim

Donna Jones
Date: 3/26/2013 5:47:00 PM

Well that's how I feel..knocked out...in shock again...thanks!

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/26/2013 10:01:00 AM

Congrats, Donna! Great win on a short winner's list.

Donna Jones
Date: 3/26/2013 5:48:00 PM

Thanks Caleb...same to ya,,,Donna

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/26/2013 9:33:00 AM

What a lovely thought. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Donna Jones
Date: 3/26/2013 5:49:00 PM

Thanks so much Joyce. Donna

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/24/2013 8:17:00 PM

I am so impressed with your of so beautiful poetry dear Donna! Each one is a gem to be shared! Keep 'em coming... love from the old duffer! xoxox

Donna Jones
Date: 3/24/2013 9:31:00 PM

I got it just fine the first time......thanks...Donna

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2013 9:00:00 PM

"with your oh so beautiful poetry"... duh!

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/12/2013 9:45:00 PM

This is so beautifully written.. like your poem sweet friend poetess Donna <3 :) all the best :) Sk

Donna Jones
Date: 3/13/2013 8:10:00 PM

Thank you so very much for reading my poem and the kind words.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 3/10/2013 7:34:00 PM

I love the title so much, Donna! It is a poem in itself; and the promise you put in it is fulfilled by the painting you are describing so romantically about these universal lovers who are everyone's best friends... A magical kiss! Must be a winner for the contest, if I was the judge! Good luck! Love, Hanitra

Donna Jones
Date: 3/10/2013 8:19:00 PM

Thank you Hanitra..very kind words from a most talented poet. I'm honored. Smiling...here....

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/10/2013 10:27:00 AM

Yes....a sweet, light kiss of sunshine, Donna! Jimbo

Donna Jones
Date: 3/10/2013 3:59:00 PM

Hey thanks Jimbo ...for stopping to read my poem :-)

Len Gasun

Date: 3/10/2013 7:53:00 AM

This is so romantic and lovely write for the theme my dear friend Donna! I love sunshine and I love your poem so much. I enjoyed reading it tonight! Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! Thank you as well for your precious time to read and leave me wonderful and inspiring comments in my writes! Have a great day! love and hugs, Leonora

Donna Jones
Date: 3/10/2013 8:04:00 AM

Leonora I don't know what I hit but here I go again...thank you so much for your kind words and I enjoy every minute of reading your wonderful writing...always Donna

Donna Jones
Date: 3/10/2013 7:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Eileen....I was standing on my porch last night looking at the moon when this idea came to me...hope you are feeling better

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/10/2013 1:35:00 AM

Romantic...sweetly romantic! Just the way I like it! Hugs!

Donna Jones
Date: 3/10/2013 8:06:00 AM

Thanks Eileen.I was standing on my porch last night looking at the moon when this idea came to me..hope you are feeling better...I don't know why the first reply jumped up to Leonora...????

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2013 12:47:00 AM

oh, this is like a short version of a poem I wrote on the same topic long ago!! I love this. I hope the judge scores it high!!

Donna Jones
Date: 3/10/2013 7:52:00 AM

Really! What is the name of it, If it is on soup I'd love to look it up and read it..thanks for stopping....Donna

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2013 12:24:00 AM

a sweet poem Donna, -.Linda

Donna Jones
Date: 3/10/2013 7:58:00 AM

Well Linda I'm sure you and the moon and stars are an item still! You get your magic from somewhere!!!!!....looking at the moon last night knowing how strong the power of the suns kiss is to give light to the moon inspired my lil poem. Great Sunday to ya..Donna

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/9/2013 9:05:00 PM

I just love poems about the moon, and the sunshine is a nice addition to the poem! This is a very good entry into the sunshine contest! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a masterful piece, quite a good moon addition to the sunshine twist! Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 3/9/2013 9:23:00 PM

Thank you Russell I guess my mind twists in weirder directions..than most...haha..I'm always glad to see you there on my screen makes my day....