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A Journey Into Healing

I woke up everyday Gone to church daily I promised to do everything To experience complete healing Until one night a strange dream came I vomitted all what was inside me My blood dripped until its last drop Astonished while asleep My life has changed until then A whole person came out of pen.

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Constance La France

Date: 7/24/2015 8:25:00 AM

Marvin, you have penned an incredible write. A raw and gripping 7 and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your misjudged contest , I am very honored

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/24/2015 10:09:00 AM

Thank you my friend!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/3/2015 8:50:00 PM

Thought and feelings written for posterity will bring forth change... first to the writer, and if he allows it inside himself, the reader. A good read indeed, Marvin! Thank you once again for my placement in your contest. hugs!

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/3/2015 10:45:00 PM

Great Kim! Thanks and welcome!

Nikta Sol

Date: 6/18/2015 2:55:00 AM

wow, this was a very nice poem. the last line is my favorite part of the poem. :-) good job!

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 6/18/2015 9:19:00 AM

Thanks Nikta sol!