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A January Night

Frost feathers pattern the windowpane in this room. a cold night ahead.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2011 9:31:00 AM

I can feel the chill..Good descriptiveness...Started raining cold rain here..At first drip drip onto the birdbath..Then lots of drips..Very cold rain...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 8:41:00 PM

wow, this is so pretty, Carol. Glad you enjoyed my 55. I have put it in two contests so far and still have got NOTHING with it. hahaha. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/18/2011 7:24:00 AM

Very nice haiku with nice images, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2011 5:12:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Carol. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/18/2011 5:03:00 AM

I like this image. Lovely.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/17/2011 6:43:00 PM

Nice haiku Carol...makes me cold just to read it. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 6:23:00 PM

sounds like this haiku needs an extra blanket... enjoyed your poem Carol.. i know exactly how you feel about that cold night,..p.d.