A Hunger Unfed

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03/28/24

This or That vol.24

Contest by Edward Ibeh.

A Hunger Unfed Hunger of my earnest love till unfed. Your deep dense glance pierced my core of heart. Swam and sank slowly in your love unsaid. Though for the rest of life we were apart. Your sapphire eyes mesmerized to whelm Hunger of my earnest love till unfed. It's your charming glances only to blame. Bygone days only haunting me in bed. I know, in social bond we are not tied. Also. I'm ignorant of your feelings Hunger of my earnest love till unfed. Somehow my love is stuck in glass ceiling. No recognition of our love. Though for each other we were made. Unison : We truly deserved. Hunger of my love till unfed.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/8/2024 8:08:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this superb poem, Anisha. A delightful read.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/28/2024 10:46:00 AM

Dear Anisha, your poem echoes the ache of unfulfilled love. Through wonderful imagery, you convey the longing and yearning that linger in the heart when love remains unspoken. I loved that it's a testament to the power of emotions left unsaid, hauntingly beautiful yet tinged with a sense of loss. - Blessings, Daniel