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Quote: "There are people in the world so hungry, that God cannot appear to them except in the form of bread.” – Mahatma Gandhi In wars, innocent lives are the cost, Their homes, their dreams, forever lost. Starvation strikes, food laid to waste, Leaving many hungry in its haste. In silent shadows where hunger hides, Aching emptiness, sorrow abides. Whispers in the dark seek a ray of light, A glimmer of hope to end the night. In bellies hollow, echoes resound, Souls wear thin, despair is found. Streets echo with desperation's cries, As hunger's grip tightens, hope tries. Yet within hearts, resilience blooms, Defying hunger's relentless gloom. Let's extend our hands, open wide, To those in need, nowhere to hide. In acts of kindness, flames are fed, Bringing warmth to the hungry, unfed.

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Date: 4/8/2024 6:44:00 PM
Poignant and powerful, Jay:-) You've shined a light on the plight of the downtrodden. I loved the Ghandi quote. Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest!
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Date: 3/23/2024 1:11:00 AM
Worse than injury by bullet or explosion, must be the horror of hunger. a tragedy of war, that slowly kills, while innocent parents watch their children starve. Your poem highlights these atrocities so well dear Jay. You have written a brilliant poem. Its a favorite for me and I wish you well for a favorable win in the competition. your friend Wen
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Date: 3/22/2024 5:21:00 PM
We all need to be aware of the tragedies caused by war ... hunger being one of the worst. Thank you for sharing this important reminder to all of us, Jay. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
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Date: 3/22/2024 4:35:00 PM
a poignant and compelling read for me, Jay. War creates devastation and poverty, the supply of food disrupted. I like the positive ending...if we all extend a hand of kindness, we can put aside this madness! Great job! Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 3/22/2024 11:26:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write. Great picture/ending. Some have so much/some have so little... Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away..........
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Date: 3/22/2024 10:48:00 AM
Hello Jay, A very nice portrayal of the harsh reality faced by many around the world. The use of emotive language creates a powerful impact, shedding light on the plight of those suffering from hunger and deprivation. Emphasizing Mahatma Gandhi's quote adds depth and resonance to the poem's message of compassion and solidarity. I love your call to action, which inspires empathy and reminds us of the importance of helping those in need. Truly touching and thought-provoking. - Blessings, Daniel
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