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This is dedicated to Barbie, a life-long friend who inspired this poem with the photos she took of this house most haunted....thank you!

It stood there looking empty and old, neglected and sad with windows shuttered, covered in shadow both day and night, hovered over by trees whose branches disguised the house and made it seem a part of the overgrown landscape, completely surrounding it, keeping strangers and unawares at bay. It stood there shrinking from the present almost lifeless, a house with no soul no face, no breath, as if it started out as a ruin and was determined to remain so for all time, unwanted, unkempt, shunned by passersby, its roof looking tortured its doors uncertain as to whether they opened at all and no one knew and no one asked. It stood there talking to itself in a silent conversation that no one heard, talking about things that used to be as though the Past was in the Now and the Now belonged to the Past, and who would dare to knock on its doors or tap on its windows to see if anyone would answer or show their presence to the world outside, a world gone by. I stood there on many a night along the side of the road just endlessly peering at this lonely old place wondering, waiting for a light inside to be turned on at the same appointed time emanating from behind heavy and yellowed lace curtains that looked like tattered spider webs in only one crooked window and one window only hung with spidery lace. I stood there on those moonlit nights bewitched by this house listening to calls and breaths of wild things that roamed all around me under ink-black star-filled skies, but no light from moon nor star could illumine this clapboard-covered curio from another day and age concealed by branches, vines and bramble, bushes and nettles and mystery. I stood there wondering who turned on that only light, who roamed the house by night who walked its tilted floors who locked its uncertain doors who hung the curtains of lace who built this unsettling place who called this abode their home and how many hallways would they roam and are there secrets that lived inside and what was the bramble trying to hide, was there anything for it to reveal anything for it to tell this house haunted that knew me so well? copyright © 2019 Gregory Firlotte

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Date: 9/15/2022 12:25:00 PM
wondering, waiting for a light inside to be turned on OMG I thought it was just me who did this. I love it, definitely a fav to read again and again
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Nora!! I wrote this poem about my childhood experiences 60 years ago -- and the house is still standing, ready to collapse and still inhabited. The yard is overgrown and bushes and trees cover the house almost completely. Scary!
Date: 3/9/2022 8:37:00 AM
Very, very well written, pulling in the reader as you set your scene. I enjoyed this very much.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, James! Even though I wrote this poem from childhood memories 60 years ago, the house is still standing and ready to collapse and still inhabited -- how strange and creepy is that? I went inside only once and thought I was living in Victorian times -- everything was antique, dark and foreboding.
Date: 3/8/2022 2:50:00 AM
I loved it!!! A very well written poem and I enjoyed it. I was looking forward to hearing about the ghost and spirits and their stories. I'm a super paranormal fan. Ghosts are left in houses and are earthbound because their story has been left incomplete. Just my interpretation. But again I really loved the poem.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Shirley! This house is still standing (barely) and still occupied. The yard is completely overgrown and practically obscures the house. I described the house in my poem as I saw it 60 years ago -- and it has deteriorated further but is still inhabited. Even the neighbors are frightened of it!
Date: 3/7/2022 1:17:00 PM
Spooky. I've seen ghosts. Lived in haunted houses x 2. Love to see the photos of the interior of the house that you write of here. It seems to me that some houses and the remnants of life haunting them, living in their very foundations, floorboards, walls, exteriors, and the spectres looking out their windows ...call out to certain people. Especially those considered 'sensitive'...great write.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lady Labyrinth! This house (which is ready to collapse) is still occupied and even the neighbors avoid going near it. And in my poem, I described it from 60 years ago -- that's how creepy it was back then. The house is a supernatural force, I think!
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 3/8/2022 3:07:00 AM
I would love to hear your experiences. So this Restaurant here in Ok that I work at is ice cream/rest/marketplace and one day I was in the walk-in and someone tapped me on the shoulder, no one there. I came out and the coworkers were laughing they said we see that you've met Tex and Maisy I said what they pointed to the cameras. Plain as day there was a cowboy in a long rain jacket cowboy hat and gun. In the corner was Maisy sweeping the floor. I chuckled. Here's the thing I'm a sensitive and every restaurant I've worked at there's always ghosts. The kids that worked for me were scared and kept telling me why are you talking to them?? I told them they just want someone to know they're here and they miss their family. So no joke kids start talking to them and the lights flickered....they were so happy. I have so many experiences but that one is my favorite.
Date: 3/7/2022 11:04:00 AM
Who, what, when were and why has this house abandoned come to you? Perhaps a connection or a profound synchronicity? Very nice verse. I am glad your poems came to me, Gregory!
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya! This is a real house in Maine on the very street where I grew up. The house currently is in dire condition and looking ready to collapse, although it is still occupied. Even the neighbors today are frightened of it!
Date: 3/14/2021 11:54:00 PM
This is a fabulous write! we have one not far from where we live and it is in very good condition but unoccupied for 20 years. A very expensive property abandoned! You describe the house and your reaction to it so well!!
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/15/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Krish! This house is still standing, ready to collapse, covered completely by trees and bushes and still occupied. Even the neighbors are frightened of it. And to think my poem is a recollection of my childhood experiences 60 years ago -- and the house is still there. Creepy and strange, indeed!
Date: 10/1/2019 12:45:00 PM
Hello Gregory Firlotte, so nice to meet you. This is a creepy poem. It made my skin crawl. Now i wonder who lives there in spirit. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2019 1:44:00 PM
Hello Gregory, I wonder if it is haunted.Do you think it is? Have a nice day my friend.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 10/1/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene! It's a real house up the road where I grew up in Maine...and it's still there. All overgrown and even more creepy.

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