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A Furious Brain Storm

So easily my brain ceases to be Lacked in comfort how hectic it could be Brain cells wrapped around membranes like tree stems Within the frameworks of the Universe Brain cells have more mass than stars that compass So easily my brain ceases to be Dendrites form the shadows of tree branches Visually compelling to the eye-minded Brain cells wrapped around membranes like tree stems Does this brainstorm begin and have an end? Twirling and swirling can’t we comprehend? So easily my brain ceases to be Medicines that we can’t apprehend Enabling the brainstorm that never ends Brain cells wrapped around membranes like tree stems Mystery enshrouds our Brain’s functions Those pills blunt and fill those with apathy So easily my brain ceases to be Brain cells wrapped around membranes like tree stems

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Date: 2/7/2021 9:51:00 AM
Great tribute to our mysterious brain, Rukhsana ~ It's a pleasure to find this lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology
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Rukhsana Afridi
Date: 4/28/2021 4:44:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/11/2019 11:07:00 AM
Amazing work! A veritable brain storm.
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Rukhsana Afridi
Date: 4/28/2021 4:44:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 7/27/2019 8:31:00 AM
Captivating piece! Been diving into brain for just over a year now, fascinating thing.
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Rukhsana Afridi
Date: 11/13/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Maureen! Yea, the workings of the brain are so mysterious.
Date: 7/27/2019 6:27:00 AM
Brilliant poetry, this form can be difficult but your did it so well..
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Rukhsana Afridi
Date: 11/13/2019 10:25:00 AM
Thanks! Silent One. Yes, sometimes the Villanelle form can be quite challenging at times.

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