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A Former Great Nations Squandered Wealth I

Swept up into piles; everywhere Abouts; in collected heaps all Around. It is almost as if the drab Streets were strewn with the Precious wealth of King Solomon's Gold! How it seems so far back, when, at Springs nagging behest, those Cautious tips, encouraged by Warming beguilement of new winds, Gingerly unwound To reveal those never-before-seen Leaves; But their sap, like my zest, has Run dry; Shuffling disconsolately to and fro As those of us, that, in our Unnoticed maudulin, have grown Steadily more old:- As if Hardrada's slain warriors, Covered by their cracked shields, Lifeless and fallen they lie. A flock of racquous Starlings, Scuttering downwards, noisily Alight On the stripped branchs of a Diminished and abject tree; Although a sizeable band, growing Daily, hardly a paused murmuration Dropped from flight... Now I know another Autumn is Nearly done. I note the resounding emptiness of The wide avenue compares favorably With the compressed and leaden sky; The sudden intervention of an Appealing thought, and it occurrs To me, That, if I were as swift as Fleet-footed Leonidas then maybe I too, this desperate day, Could outstrip the retreating Shadows of this disconsolate Sun? Alas...I am aging with every Approaching Winter, pattern Baldness spreading across my Thinning crown; A body can feel a cold dampness in This sort of air... Then - an involuntary shiver! Perhaps unwelcomed memories of Many a wasted year... Thinks I with a rueful frown; In the minds eye a glimpse Of the ferocious Wolf slipping Quietly through the half-open gate - Here he once roamed in all his Perfect savagery! And, standing admidst the vestiges Of a former great nations Squandered wealth, to which many sentimental hearts still Adhere, To wonder what the patient Saxon Should make at the sight of such Frenzied lameness... The ruination of this his once Untamed and wild estate? That ancient Saxon full knew. He knew of cruel hardship, of all Essential things that so engaged Him, His pressing needs, his Thanes Daily bread; Though of heady aspirations...he Had but few. He knew of the devastaing blight Of sweltering drought, He knew of the tipped rivers Flooding swell; But the old Saxon? ...he just Re-doubled his efforts - and took it Manfully on the chin! For when the hardy Saxon undertook To do a job it would usually happen That he did it well. And what of his countless, long since Ignored, secluded and wooded dells, His dusky, hollowed glades? Deep inside: trapped sunlight still Floating liken a glassed surface Upon a pond; Once, therein, that Saxons All-consuming hours taken up by the Resounding crunch of the ever eager Blade! And were it truly ever was this Humongous supposed repository For Englands "Green Man"? Ditto For the fabled Unicorn recorded By the minstral balladeer's Luteing song; Ancient Greeks did say that only The gentle and pensive maiden Had the power to coax such a Timid beast: one of many wild Wraiths, emblazoned on many a regal Shield, that do unashamedly beguile Throughout our legendary history! Our mundane present now a sad Parody of melancholic destitution; As if a Summer laid to rest...and, Thus, finally, we reluctantly Grieve. The dismal plink, plink, plinks Of trickling water dripping into The roadside drain; If that stoic Saxon had any woes He would have no time to lend to Idle moments wasted dawdling Among dead leaves. Where now Wodan, his many other Gods? His charioteering tales and Warring stories not even Half-forgotten memories that only Befuddled minds of lunatics might Mutter. How resplendant the rusting gasworks Appears, as, behind her looming tanks, Sol's disintegrating orb wearily Slinks; Who would deny, at such instants, Much dimming beauty can be found... Even inside a crowded towns huddled Clutter. The low streetlamps, mounted like Matt pearls, beginning, cautiously, To reignite; Predictably this awakens some Roosting birds...some of which, Dutifully, begin to sing. A muddled obliqueness, inherent On varying angles, converging On the temporary juxtapositions Invented by the electric bulbs Deceitful light; And although I have never felt much Of a compulsion towards sentimental Reminiscing, Or to seek solace in the comforting Familiarity of a mothers Romantic recollections, to which we All sometimes cling, I grope like a blind man...as if Reaching out into the foaming Darkness intent on finding Something essentially quintessential That I instinctively sense is so Oddly missing. To be continued...

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Date: 4/15/2018 5:09:00 PM
Dear John There's so much to think about here on so many levels. Thank you for inviting us to reflect on our own mortality and the state of the world. I think you shamed up the feelings of so many of us in the last ) lines. I gripe like a blind man.. Best always, Here's to preserving poetry as the light that nourishes and strengthens all of us! Thanks for sharing your wisdom, Very best regards, Kathy
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John Fleming
Date: 6/18/2018 1:54:00 AM
Thank you, Kathy. I do always enjoy and appreciate your insightful remarks concerning my poems...it is much appreciated I can assure you. My very warmest regards...as ever; you are a much valued friend, Kathy! :) john
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 4/15/2018 5:11:00 PM
Sorry for all the autocorrects..another thing against which it often seems useless. To rail against LOL
Date: 1/23/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thus the mighty are fallen, They have eaten thier own children in an all consuming need to be great. Dug up the starts paved with gold in order to pay for their sins. You have captured a countries demise well. Look forward to the next addition.
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Date: 1/23/2018 6:21:00 PM
Sigh...yes indeed -- the demise of a once great nation! But that is the way of all things is it not? As I am so fond of saying: "nothing lasts forever". Not even the mightiest of things...or even countries for that matter. My very warmest regards, Patricia. :) john P.s Glad to see you back!!
Date: 1/18/2018 6:52:00 PM
That was a nice tale told in this poem. A great poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/21/2018 4:32:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene...your visits and kind comments are always much appreciated by me. My very best regards, Darlene - cheers! :) john
Date: 1/15/2018 6:50:00 PM
Great poem, John - it feels very wintery, and reminds me of TS Elliot, one of my favorites. Looking forward to part 2.
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Date: 1/21/2018 4:31:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes. Part two has already been written; however the old Saxon has been pouring over it...and he finds himself rather displeased. I can feel a huge amount of re-writing coming on! Ah well...sigh. My very warmest regards, Agnes. :) john
Date: 1/10/2018 3:28:00 PM
Where is part two John? No rush lol.
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Date: 1/14/2018 9:33:00 AM
The old Saxon is still ruminating upon his apparent lose...he is not a man who can be unduly rushed into giving expression to his inner most thoughts. No doubt he will eventually speak when he has something worth saying. My very best regards, Silent One - cheers! :) john
Date: 1/10/2018 7:37:00 AM
John, amazing write, i love your choice of words, unique in every way. Congratulations on your poem of the week, always Linda
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Date: 1/10/2018 12:57:00 PM
Hello, Linda. Not seen much of you for quite a while...taking a much needed sabbatical, of sorts, no doubt? Nice to see you back on the "Soup" once again! Many thanks for the visit and kind remarks...it is most appreciated by me - thank you! My very best regards. :) john
Date: 1/9/2018 10:13:00 PM
Wow...I'm in awe my friend. I'm looking forward to more..POTW is well rewarded to you John. "As those of us, that, in our Unnoticed maudulin, have grown Steadily more old" I like that little inference. So many memorable lines and great comparisons throughout, like the groping like a blind man.. a very poignant, maybe more so gripping end to the verse. I await more of the Saxon's journey. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/10/2018 7:55:00 AM
Hi, Laura :) Yes I rather like this particular old serf...he is "pure grain" straight through. As I replied to Connie earlier: for the moment he is trapped here with us, caught out of his time. Perhaps the Unicorn might know a way home? But hey, Unicorn's do not exist...do they? My very warmest regards, Laura. :) john P.s Many thanks; I will be revisiting your poems very soon :)
Date: 1/9/2018 12:42:00 PM
What an amazing write John, I don't have the words to express how inspiring this poem is, worthy of all the accolades and more. I agree with Tom you are in a league of your own, thanks for gracing us with your beautiful words.
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Date: 1/10/2018 7:19:00 AM
John, so very nice to see you as always! It is because of the generous encouragement of such commentators as your good self that I continue to try and produce my best poetry...I have much to learn; but...one foot at a time I always say. My very warmest regards, John. :) john
Date: 1/8/2018 2:08:00 PM
DEFINITELY ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME. Love the Saxon Wodan mythology references as well as that of the Greeks.. This truly and truly a gem my friend! And a new Fav...
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Date: 1/9/2018 3:06:00 PM
Hello, Robert -- so very good to see you again! Thank you for taking the time to visit and leave such lovely remarks...you are, of course, always most welcome here. My very best wishes and...warmest regards, Robert. :) john
Date: 1/8/2018 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on being awarded the honour of the POTW for this very dramatic and epic write John - and on the first week of the New Year too - all the best for the rest of 2018...Maria
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Date: 1/9/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank you, Maria, for your nice compliments and the kind congratulations...I very much appreciate it. All the very best to you also for your New Year. My warmest regards. :) john
Date: 1/7/2018 10:18:00 AM
I am so inadequate to comment on a piece such as this. A classic. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:10:00 AM
Sunlite, you are most welcome here -- as always of course! Thank you for the visit and leaving such generous remarks...it is most kind. My very best regards, Sunlite. :) john
Date: 1/7/2018 8:15:00 AM
The last stanza really took it home. I enjoyed this epic write. Congrats on POTW.
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:03:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to visit, Richard...and thank you also for remarking on the poem - much appreciated! Please be assured that you are always most welcome here. My very best regards, Richard - cheers! :) john
Date: 1/7/2018 8:07:00 AM
Dear John, I am back to congratulate you on POTW! I am so happy to see this poem honored. It is a magnificent offering! : )
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Date: 1/8/2018 2:58:00 AM
Hi, Connie. Thank you so very much! I have to confess...I rather like that old Saxon; I think he will be making a return sooner or later...methinks he has still not found a way back home. All my very warmest regards as always, Connie. :) john P.s Maybe the Unicorn can help him find his way back...if of course they ever even existed. ;)
Date: 1/7/2018 7:01:00 AM
An absolutely fantastic epic write, I believe one of the finest by your pen.. A worthy poetry of the week....
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Date: 1/8/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One. I did not realize the poem was the new POTW until I read your comments...it was quite a surprise; thanks for the visit and the nice compliment - much appreciated! My very best regards. :) john
Date: 1/3/2018 12:25:00 PM
The glades remain but they're "hollowed" no more. You've translated their beauty and their value; infecting us. We'll be sure to 'pass it on'.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 1/7/2018 6:29:00 PM
Opps. meant "hallowed" no more. If god is excluded from the modern cultural mythos, then nothing CAN be holy. But we can't deny our 'Spirit'.
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Date: 1/4/2018 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, Robert...your comments are most kind. Allow me to express my pleasure at becoming acquainted - pleased to meet you! My very best regards, Robert - cheers! :) john
Date: 1/3/2018 2:22:00 AM
the dire state of societal concerns are deeply imprinted in your piece, john... wonderful write and thanks for your comments...huggs
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:50:00 PM
Hello, Nette. Always nice for me to see you appearing on my little corner; I regard you as being one of the original "Select Few" who first made me feel so welcome here at the "Soup", and thus encouraged me to continue to try and write more poetry. I hold you in the highest esteem I can assure you! All my very warmest regards, Nette, as always. :) john
Date: 1/2/2018 7:26:00 PM
I absolutely love this piece. A Fav.
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:38:00 PM
Thank you, Carol! Please be assured you are always welcome here at anytime. My very warmest regards - Cheers! :) john P.s Thank you so very much for the "Fav" - much appreciated!
Date: 1/2/2018 1:43:00 PM
Finally I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your unwavering support and kindness. Of course this poem is a HUGE FAV for me. With Lots Of Love Always My Dear Friend, armand.
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:34:00 PM
Your salvation was never in doubt, Armand...it was just a question of time. I am very proud to know you -- you are an example to all of us! May I wish you all the very best for your new future! My very warmest regards and my very best wishes as ever, Armand. Your friend. :) john P.s Old Chinese proverb: "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"! Laozi. I look forward to hearing about your new film, Armand.
Date: 1/2/2018 1:40:00 PM
John I also want to thank you for your kind words on my page recently. It literally brought tears of joy to my eyes. I have so much respect for you as both an artist and a person. I feel blessed to have met you on these pages. Having just lost my mother in October I have gone back to my love of directing stage plays. I am also in the process of directing a film. Directing stage is my first and grandest of all loves. I will keep you up to date on the film and make sure you get to see it.
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:13:00 PM
Armand, I am both happy and pleased that you are starting to sound like your old self...true testament to your inner strength and resoluteness - your a good man!! An old sea captain once said to me: "When shipwrecked never try to swim for it, however tempting it might appear to be...cling to the wreckage, and, eventually...it will bring you safely in to the shore". You've made it, Armand , you clung determinedly to the wreckage - and it has brought you home!!!
Date: 1/2/2018 1:33:00 PM
As you know John I am a huge fan of your poetry. Not to be compared with but the poetry on poetrysoup it lives, breathes, matches and at times even surpasses all poetry ever read by me. That would include Byron, Shelly, Coleridge, Yates, Dickinson, Elliot, Whitman, Keats, Frost, Platt, Neruda, Poe, Angelou...you know the list. We all do. You have a very special gift and you have never squandered it. You work with earnest on everything you write.
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:04:00 PM
Armand...thank you so very much for such an amazing tribute...I am almost speechless. I am very proud that you should see fit to mention the effort I put into trying to produce that almost unattainable thing - the perfect poem! One day perhaps. :) I believe that you should never stop trying to improve upon what you have already written; how I would love to see what W B Yeats would have made of the opportunity accorded by the internet!!
Date: 1/2/2018 7:34:00 AM
Poetry as it should be: Meaningful, artistic and profound! A joy to read! It enriches the soul dear, John!
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Date: 1/4/2018 12:55:00 PM
Always a great pleasure to see you putting in an appearance, Demetrios...please be assured you are always very welcome here at my little corner of the "Soup". All my very best regards, Demetrios, and many thanks - cheers! :) john
Date: 1/1/2018 4:47:00 PM
John...I am in utter amazement at the fluidity of this great write. After reading such a masterpiece of intellect, eloquence and linguistic art, I am even more humbled that you would take time to browse my poetry, for mine pales in comparison to your talent. I aspire to someday have the ability to pen something as inspiring as this piece. Also, your humble attitude toward your writing; it's as if you do not see how it affects your readers. Following you account so that I may learn from you.
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Date: 1/2/2018 2:04:00 AM
Rhoda, it is my great pleasure to become acquainted with your very good self -- pleased to know you! Feel free to visit and comment at any time you please; I can assure you...you will always be made most welcome. Many thanks, Rhoda...and my warmest regards. :) john
Date: 1/1/2018 4:09:00 PM
Hi John, i'm not normally speechless, but this wonder i've just read(2) leaves me that way, yet somehow i relate to everything you say, although from a simpler source, i would say that the good old days are now just that...happy new year to you,
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Date: 1/2/2018 2:14:00 AM
Thank you, Harry...always a real pleasure to see you have paid a visit. I am very pleased you found the poem so very appealing...I had a feeling you might. I intend to carry the poem forward; I have already wrote out quite a few more verses...but as of yet the old Saxon cannot decide in which direction he will trudge off towards -- he is not one for rushing! Lol. :) A bit like life really: one fork in the road always leads to another! Catch up with you soon, Harry. My very warmest regards! :) john
Date: 1/1/2018 8:23:00 AM
WOW! John, I love reading thick books or rather long story. I can't wait for the second part. Such an amazing write! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/2/2018 3:41:00 AM
Hi, Akkina. Thank you for taking time to visit and leave your comments...you know of course I very much appreciate it - much obliged! My very best regards, Akkina! :) john
Date: 1/1/2018 8:12:00 AM
This is excellent and beautiful poetry, John. I followed in the wake of your pen, enthralled by its rich content. Somehow, at a certain point, I felt a connection to Edward Rutherfurd's bestseller "London'. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 1/2/2018 3:39:00 AM
Not seen you in a while, Paul...hope life is treating you well, and you are fit and happy. Always enjoy your nice comments - much appreciated! Thanks for dropping by, Paul...will catch up with you very soon. Best regards - Cheers! :) john
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