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A Fork In the Road

A fork in the road Forcing the weary old monk To then decline both... And marvelling how his feet Ignore imponderables.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2021 7:48:00 AM

Creative one. I enjoyed reading this and I know how that monk felt for fatigue is mostly my life now. Sara

John Fleming
Date: 4/26/2021 8:06:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. I really enjoyed working hard at this one...very pleased at the way it turned out. I too can sympathize about the inconvenience of fatigue...and I have to go out very soon to do my overtime before my night shift starts. Ah well...no peace for the wicked. Stay safe, Sara...and keep up the good work. My very best regards! :) john

John Fleming

Date: 8/26/2020 8:30:00 AM

Thanks Brenda...always enjoy your comments. In affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/20/2020 5:45:00 AM

Ahh John I enjoy how you have changed up your poetry! Still a great joy to read!:)all my affection!:)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/10/2021 5:15:00 PM

As I always enjoy your words!:)

John Fleming
Date: 8/26/2020 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Brenda...always enjoy your comments. In affection. :) john

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/4/2020 4:39:00 AM

A very catchy poem to ponder John. I loved it! xxoo

John Fleming
Date: 8/26/2020 8:34:00 AM

Always lovely to see you coming around, Connie. Will catch up very soon on your latest work. Your good friend. :) john

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/23/2020 8:55:00 PM

A thought-provoking tanka! Great imagination. Cheers!

John Fleming
Date: 8/26/2020 8:39:00 AM

Thanks JayC. Will be making a visit in the very near future to your little corner of the woods...you always did pen some extremely good stuff. Much appreciated! :) john. P.s rightly or wrongly...quite proud of this little effort of mine actually. :)

John Fleming

Date: 4/15/2020 4:01:00 PM

By Jove! I think you have finally cracked it, son. :)