A Find To Purpose

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Poetic Form: Verse
Inspired: 2024 March 28
Image: Conch Shell by Peakpx

A conch shell idles on a serendipitous shoreline a nearby sea furthers as an ebbing tide yields its hold a sudden breath of mountain freshness swoops through the meadowlands then out to sea merely ere it brushes a fortuitous shore indulging its way about a conch shell breathing a chord of harmonic bellows in suite succession of a favorable staging a retiring star aweigh to setting yon receptive horizons

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/28/2024 2:44:00 PM

a captivating journey complete with exquisite sighs and sounds. I especially liked "a retiring star aweigh to setting yon receptive horizons." Perfect ending. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/28/2024 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, Sara. I am attempting to add a bit of oomph to my poems as I'm noticing an increase in viewership according to TPS it stems from yon PS websites, so I'm styling, shot-in-the-darks, points to ponder, and so on. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/28/2024 6:12:00 AM

Beautiful sights and sounds, my friend--in this journey to purpose. Lovely depiction, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/28/2024 7:09:00 AM

A welcoming visit, Vijay, of your thought-filled sharing care, my friend. Aloha, William