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A Feeling To Remember

I walked across the pasture green In search of something yet unseen And as I reached the hill's crest What I saw below I felt truly blest. I very carefully made my way down Toward the little grove of trees I'd found Anxious to see what they did hide I gently pushed the brush aside. The atmosphere did suddenly change The green canopy kept the heat away As And the coolness settled round I heard the birds chirping sound. A movement to my right caused fear Not quite sure of what was near Until his antlers I did see And realized he wasn't sure of me. As I gazed into his eyes I thought I heard him breathe a sigh And as I smiled and stepped past It seemed to put his mind at rest. In shafts of light scattered here and there Wild flowers could be found Dancing on the gentle breeze Spreading pollen all around. I sat beside a flowing river In grass of carpet green Soon the little lady bugs Were resting on my jeans. A hefty branch protruded From the river's edge And as I watched ten little turtles Found themselves a place to rest. As they basked in the sun They seemed so at peace Until a pesky magpie Dive bombed them from a tree. As I watched natures wonders I heard a shrill scream. Suddenly I realized I am all alone I reached into my pocket And took out my cell phone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/3/2009 11:46:00 AM
Marycile, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2009 9:53:00 AM
Well, seems this one got by me, Cile ... smile ... its so hard to keep up and this wonderful write is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... best of luck int he contest!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Cile. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:19:00 PM
great you! mary congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 4/1/2009 7:30:00 PM
I loved this the first time I read it, dear Cille and I am so happy to see it in the finals. Good luck to you dear friend. Lainie
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:44:00 PM
A wonderful poem, and so well deserving to make it to the semi finals. Love the way it ends...I didn't expect that!! Good luck, Marycile!
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:06:00 AM
Congrats Cile on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/31/2009 1:58:00 AM
Congrats on your succesd in the PS contest.Best wishes fo th next round.Marycile.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on making the final cut. Well done and best wishes for the final round. Hope you are doing well. Love Heidie
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Date: 11/13/2008 5:31:00 AM
you sure know how to put a smile on someones face my friend what great imagery bet that deer scared ya huh I know it would of me esp those horns thanks for sharing and congrats on this being featured keep up the great writting hope your enjoying those songs
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Date: 11/10/2008 4:30:00 PM
That last line surprised me. Great job with this poem, and well deserved to be featured! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/10/2008 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations Cile on your double featured write! So awesome and well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/10/2008 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poems being featured this week Cile.Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:44:00 PM
It took them a while but they finally featured this one and a double feature to boot. Congratulations Cile. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/9/2008 3:46:00 PM
I liked the surprise last line. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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