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A DAMSEL ENCHANTS FELICITY Aurora breaks, Cinderella damsel enchants felicity, gliding halcyon-- implanting jazzy kisses, languorous murmurs. . . Nectared opulent press quakes reactions. Succulent tissues urge virginal wanting: xerothermic, yearning zenith! _____________________________________________________________________ *** xerothermic -- adapted to or flourishing to environment that is hot and dry halcyon -- care -free CONTEST NAME: 10 OR LESS LINES Contest Sponsor: Rob ~~2nd place~~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo 2:28 pm, September 23, 2015

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 10/18/2015 11:34:00 PM

Just plain fun! It was clever and told the story & images exactly! SUPER WRITE!

Skat A

Date: 10/16/2015 9:32:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 7:48:00 PM

wait a second. this was not a screwed contest. So I bet it won before then. SUre hope so!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 7:47:00 PM

oh my, it did not win before? BIG congrats this time round. I really love this one.

James Inman

Date: 10/15/2015 9:02:00 AM

Nicely done Olive.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/15/2015 2:03:00 AM

Congrats on superb win Olive with this wonderful write!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2015 1:42:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Upma.. =`)

Michael Tor

Date: 10/15/2015 12:44:00 AM

Olive congrats on your win!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/5/2015 1:17:00 AM

thanks much Michael.. =`)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/14/2015 8:51:00 PM

Olive, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/5/2015 1:09:00 AM

thanks much Alexis..=`)

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/14/2015 8:29:00 PM

WONDERFULLY CREATIVE! Congrats on your win my friend!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/4/2015 12:15:00 AM

thanks much robert.. =`)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/27/2015 2:43:00 PM

Expressed in exceptional and genius style. My favorite poem and favorite poetess. 7+ and loved always my lovely friend,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2015 7:38:00 AM

thanks much BL..=`) boosting me to write more and more.. =`)

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/25/2015 8:03:00 PM

Your language is luscious, your felicity so fertile. I surge with heated hypersensitivity great Poetess. To your zenith I indulge with zest. "Nectared opulent press..." that first flavor of lust is so mighty an urge. This poem is hot and intelligent, very efficient in it's turn on power Olive...J.A.B. A FAV!! Awesome style!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/13/2015 10:34:00 PM

Justin, I want to express my sincerest appreciation to your ever generous comment that encourages me to write and write more.. =`) ~Olive Eloisa

Emile Pinet

Date: 9/25/2015 9:17:00 AM

The ability to bend words to any shape through poetry is frustrating, difficult and mind numbing, but when you get it right, others see the magic and it's all worth it. Well done. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/4/2015 1:42:00 AM

Emile, thank you if somehow the way I bended the words here made you see magic.. =`) thanks.. =`)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/24/2015 8:11:00 PM

Wonderful, Olive! You mastered this difficult challenge very well! Love it. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/4/2015 1:40:00 AM

Sandra, thank you for your generous comment.. =`) but I just tried this form.. this is actually my first try.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2015 9:35:00 PM

wowowow!! That is GOOD work. Makes me want to try this contest too!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2015 2:58:00 AM

thanks much Andrea.. =`)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/23/2015 8:04:00 PM

Firstly Good luck for contest with this wonderful poem. Amazing and exquisite both. 7 and My favorite poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2015 2:58:00 AM

thanks much my friend.. =`) I m glad you like my poem.. =`)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/23/2015 4:04:00 PM

Always amazed how you can get these types of poems to flow so well...good luck Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2015 5:16:00 AM

Thanks much Tim.. I was really challenged by the theme and the form.. and i really like such it makes me think... =`)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/23/2015 3:51:00 PM

you woke up my senses, eloi.. so fine.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2015 2:30:00 AM

Thanks much Nette.. =`)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2015 2:34:00 PM

wonderful sensual ABC Olive good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/27/2015 12:01:00 AM

Jan thanks much.. =`)

James Fraser

Date: 9/23/2015 1:38:00 PM

Written beautifully, displayed wonderfully little one. Loved it's sensuous flow, mmmm ;-) Always enjoying your poetry to grow, flow <3 good luck in the contest, hugs from your Huge One xxx

James Fraser
Date: 9/30/2015 2:55:00 PM

Your a lovely beginner little one ;-) xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/26/2015 11:46:00 PM

Each time I consider myself as a beginner Huge James and you know that.. I considering myself as a beginner each time I write makes me more interested in giving more.. =`)

Constance La France

Date: 9/23/2015 11:51:00 AM

Olive, beautifully penned and I love, love your layout, best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, erotic ...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/26/2015 11:32:00 PM

Thanks much Broken Wings.. =`)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/23/2015 10:44:00 AM

Olive this is over the top. Wow this is a even. Cleverly written! Love the imagery.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/26/2015 11:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Michael.. I appreciate you dropping by.. =`) I just bite the challenge of the Sponsor and gave my best shot.. =`)

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/23/2015 10:35:00 AM

It must have taken some time and thinking to craft this beautiful poem.Wonderful form,and impressive words.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2015 5:21:00 AM

Actually not that long time.. =`) sometimes when i see something and thoughts rush in it happens like this.. =`) its in the letter xyz that i took time. Hehehe

Joseph May

Date: 9/23/2015 7:38:00 AM

Beautiful write Olive...You made it look easy... best wishes in the contest...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/24/2015 5:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Joseph... =`) weeeeee maybe I wrote this poem in just three hours as of course I changed one line as well.. =`) thanks.

Mark Woods

Date: 9/23/2015 2:40:00 AM

Very, very well done. Top of the class here, you have penned a heavenly abc. Well done

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2015 7:51:00 AM

Thanks much Mark Woods, this another topic that I'm quite having second thoughts writing.. However, I like the challenge of finding words and their meaning to fit each letter.. :D See the words I used, none is two letter word... I use the letter at its fullest... =`) i like what i learned today.. :D!~Olive Eloisa