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A Collective In Pieces

We struggle to find peace in the collective because we're in pieces as a whole This fragmentation is unnatural & we're at war with the divisive No matter how you slice it us coming together should be the goal The pie in the sky is a sweet dream & those that eat are decisive Look to your mind for the answers for in its eye are the solutions The confusion is by design for in disarray we are conquered Know that ideas design things & are the beginning of conclusions Nothing exists without them for they're seeds of all that is fathered Don't be bothered by appearances as many of those are illusions I allude to this for a reason because many are easy to deceive Every piece is important to the pattern in a world that was built on collusion The puzzling truth is playing out but many are reluctant to concede

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Date: 5/2/2024 12:00:00 PM
Hello Jasen, I really liked how you unravel the complexities of our collective existence. Each word is a thread weaving through the fabric of societal fragmentation to seek unity amidst division. Your insightful perspective is that the puzzle of humanity is incomplete without every piece, and only by coming together can we unlock the true potential of our shared journey. - Blessings, Daniel
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Jasen Ridley
Date: 5/3/2024 6:27:00 AM
Exactly Daniel!! I'm glad you get it and appreciate it. Thank you so much for the feedback & for reading. Blessing to you as well my friend

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