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A Childs Eyes A little boy in underwear, he's only eight years old. Hiding there behind the chair he can't feel the cold. Hiding from the monster in the corner on the floor. Wishing he would go away and not come here no more. He's not dreaming mommy's screaming he begins to beg. Filled with fears still it's not tears that's running down his leg. Hiding there words fill the air he hears his mommies cries. Memories of yesterdays seen through a childs eyes. Just a little while ago they're sitting there just eating. Then the monster came again to dish out one more beating. Looking back her eyes both black, her friends say it's a shame. If they just knew bad dreams come true as she calls out his name. Frozen in the fear he feels love is all just lies. Torn apart a broken heart seen through a childs eyes. 9-1-2015

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Date: 9/16/2015 12:27:00 AM
Bleak, heartbreaking piece, Edwin. Our toughts and hearts are with you. Sincerely, Viv
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Date: 9/5/2015 11:09:00 AM
a very high price has been paid for this contest entry and my wish is for you is to get past the pain of which no contest could compete with such horrors....Never forget you are well loved on Soup and we care about you.....Never Forget!
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Date: 9/3/2015 7:00:00 AM
I wish you well in the contest... Regarding your own contest, "Shadows", are you going to judge it soon?
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Date: 9/2/2015 6:36:00 AM
Simply heartbreaking Edwin such an emotional write- this abuse should never happen but sadly I know it continues:-( written with tears in my eyes:-( Hugs Jan xx
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