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A Broken Dream

Through the gates of a mysterious garden, Eyes glinting in the moon, A sudden wind caught my hair, Dark chambers, a choking sound in the shadows, Unlatching the threads of a defiled soul. Feet cold on the grass, And I stood listening. The darkling seas beyond moan, Unearthing the sepultures, Secretly buried in their womb. Torn petals upon my palms lay, Engravings shrunken and old, Of some forgotten verse. The boughs were dancing there, The night sky, their flowers mirrored shimmering, Echoing their song of some broken dream. ((... I walked away from the ancient ruins,, a glimpse at those hidden hollows,, slipping into the silence.))

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/29/2015 2:28:00 PM
This is truely a piece i cant resist, I love this!!!
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Date: 2/8/2015 8:28:00 AM
I can visualize...Gautami.
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Gautami Phookan
Date: 2/22/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Rajat, you've been here in the past too reading and leaving your kind words and appreciating my work, when I've hardly reciprocated. I cannot thank you enough..
Date: 2/7/2015 3:40:00 PM
A lovely piece !
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Gautami Phookan
Date: 2/22/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thank you Nigel Fox!
Date: 2/7/2015 2:10:00 PM
such deep sad imagery Gataumi:-( Hugs jan x
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 10:43:00 AM
i am so sorry you are seeing some of my recent sad writes Guatami - I write from the heart - I do try and write with humour when I can:-) You have no need to explain Guatami - the lines of a song spring to mind - 'you say it best... why you say nothing at all' Hugs Jan xx
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Gautami Phookan
Date: 2/22/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Jan, there are times when... well, can't say. But ok, I need to pay a visit to your poems too, and be here with you guys more...

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