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A Blossoming Poppy

I'm sorry that I killed a little flower. She loved the sunrise and the dreamy night, she loved to nourish with the dew of life, colorful looks skyward to turn, to raise into heaven in the summer wind her discreet perfume, and the moon to adore in the twilight brink, the whole time believing in humans. Old-children are left standing amongst wilted flowers with a bullet to chat and in orphaned evenings they quietly hear hot crosses starting to cry for their many yearnings. By the fields angels have gathered to choose the day when the lives of flowers on crosses will break and humans will deny. I'm sorry that I killed a blossoming poppy, when death we brought into this world the poppy died too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/10/2019 5:46:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing your free verse poem. Especially liked the way you worded the line with "orphaned evenings" in it.
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Date: 1/10/2019 12:36:00 PM
Your expressive words hold much meaning, Silviu. So many lives go to waste, and yet we wash our hands like Pilate! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/17/2018 7:33:00 PM
Another excellent piece. Hope to see more this year. Glad you are posting again. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 7/3/2018 8:27:00 AM
An enjoyable read.
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Silviu Craciunas
Date: 7/4/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your visit and your comment.
Date: 6/29/2018 5:44:00 AM
Hi Silviu.. I certainly enjoyed reading your interesting poem this morning. I hope you'll take the time to let me know your thoughts on my latest write. Blessings!
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Silviu Craciunas
Date: 7/4/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your visit and your comment.

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