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A Beautiful Couch

A beautiful couch, dusted entirely; five gentle hearts insist. Just kids, learning, moving, now overturning pillows-- quite riot, so teriffic--undaunting: Victory will expand young's zodiac.

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/19/2010 7:30:00 AM

Very funny write, Susan, enjoyed reading it! And thank you for commenting "Future Dreams"! Have a great week!...Love, Gert

Vrushani Thaker

Date: 7/18/2010 10:49:00 AM

This is fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!! As usual this form is very difficult but you gave it a new concept to it!!!!!!!! well done!!!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!

Cesar Cantu

Date: 7/17/2010 12:16:00 AM

I love poetry about the mundane, it turns our world into something transcendant and beautiful. Thanks a lot for sharing..ah, and for the comment.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/16/2010 1:15:00 PM

Fun ABC poem, Susan. I'm trying to imagine all that's going on with this couch. LOL Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 7/16/2010 7:30:00 AM

Busy couch taking plenty of life Susan, kool Acrostic >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2010 7:17:00 AM

I can see that couch...Those children having fun...Great write..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work those mosquitoes love to dine on me...Sara