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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2011 9:40:00 AM

THis is very good writing, Clay. I really enjoyed the way you had the birds describing this place and how happy they are at the end of it to see the tourists leave. Sweet!!

Clay Robbins
Date: 12/25/2011 1:28:00 PM

I sincerely appreciate your comment and those that preceeded yours, Andrea I am a novice poet, unschooled in the craft but I am on occasion inspired. I'm glad to share, actually at times over zealous in my effort with strangers I meet in my business as a tour professional or even the blind-sided wo'man on the street, in line at Starbucks, such a nutty guy am I...

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/10/2011 9:32:00 PM

No wonder the tourists can't get enough...just the Redwood grow is spatacular enough! Enjoyed this also, Clay. Keep sharing your poems....a delight to read...like a peaceful retreat. : ) Annalise

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/5/2011 4:53:00 PM

At first I thought it the prison island but your explanation clarified. Sounds like a great place to visit. Nicely penned.