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Silly Sandee Stardust shuffled when she walked around the garden while she talked and talked. She said she preferred using her tiny feet because she enjoyed sniffing the sweet scent of red roses and striped, orange lilies, but knew not to go near the hot pepper chilis. Though she admired their bright color, red, Sandee had tasted one in the garden bed. Oh, my... I'd never seen her fly so fast to drink buttercup dew until the burning passed. No one could miss seeing this faerie, so fair because of her colorful clothing, chosen with care. Pinks and greens were her favorite of all hues. She wore snappy leggings of yellow and blues. Her prismatic wardrobe highlighted her gold wings, and everyone listens when this wee faerie sings. Rosebuds in her hair, big brown eyes like a bug... Sandee is a sweetheart, who gives everyone a hug.

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Date: 4/4/2024 9:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/cute "Stardust" write. What a pretty/cute picture. A fun read for all ages. Hugs are free, so give hugs away. Hope you are OK. Here is a hug for you today.... Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 4/4/2024 12:20:00 AM
An enjoyable read Lin, you can turn your hand to anything. Tom PS, soup mail.
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Date: 4/3/2024 4:27:00 PM
such a delightful and whimsical poem, dear Lin. I loved your descriptive lines and got a kick out of Sandee consuming a little too much of buttercup dew. That was just creative and brilliant! I liked 'her prismatic wardrobe highlighted her gold wings.' Your image was perfect & adorable. Have a great evening, hugs Sara
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Date: 4/3/2024 3:59:00 PM
Smashing poem, Lin. I like the chilli bit… if I ate one of those little red nukes I’d fly around the garden too. Much enjoyed. Terry
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Date: 4/3/2024 2:16:00 PM
Dear Lin, your whimsical poem dances with charm and enchantment. Through the delightful character of Sandee Stardust, you create a picture of a faerie full of life and color, flitting through the garden with boundless joy. I loved the imagery of her colorful attire and fluttering wings brings a smile to the my face, while her endearing nature shines through in every line. This is a delightful tale that of the magic all around us. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/3/2024 11:29:00 AM
aww so cute and I love the picture Lin, it is a delightful poem - I think little children would love this one:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
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