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Bells Poetry Contest

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In solitude with eyes closed, a bell flashes with a little girl chuckling, chasing it. In stillness, silence, the bell starts tolling and the girl intently stares at it, eyes beaming with glee and a radiant smile expressing delight. I opened my eyes, shook my head, thought of the childlike innocence, the display of honesty, freedom, enthusiasm and suddenly remembered my own childhood always excited hearing the church bells tolling for they meant fun, cheers, good times. Hearing the bell at six o’ clock in the evening for worship or Angelus prayer at our altar, meant having dinner with my favorite dish or dessert for dinner was served after our prayers. Hearing the bells after the morning Easter Sunday procession meant fun in the beach for everybody went there for fun and lunch to celebrate the Resurrection. Hearing the bells after the four o’ clock morning masses during the Christmas season, from December sixteen through twenty four meant eating delicious rice cakes at the church kiosk.

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Date: 12/12/2023 11:41:00 AM
Love the shape poem, Marilene! They are not easy and you made it look like child's play! You have so beautifully woven your journey of faith into the sound of bells in every season. Congratulations! Advent blessings of joy to you!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 12/12/2023 1:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. It was really fun doing this one, the challenge to write the narrative in a bell shape made me shimmy and shake every time it was going in the right direction and jumped with joy when it was done! Blessings to you. Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/12/2023 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Marilene! I loved the shape and narrative! ~ Kim
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Marilene Evans
Date: 12/12/2023 10:18:00 AM
Thank you for my placement and compliment. Have a Happy Christmas! Enjoy your day.
Date: 12/3/2023 12:39:00 AM
Oh wow, this is such a beautiful piece with so many nostalgic delights and heartwarming imageries of the Christmas time! Ahh, I love the shape n design as well.. The bell is truly visible and your wordplay is absolutely wonderful.. Creatively woven :)
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Marilene Evans
Date: 12/3/2023 11:08:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya for the compliments. Wonderful to meet you. Happy Holidays.
Date: 12/2/2023 2:13:00 AM
This is very creative, you did the design so well and it contains a wonderful poem on this theme..
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Marilene Evans
Date: 12/2/2023 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, thank you so much. Happy Holidays.

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