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4 letters can describe us all Sane, Slim, True, Tall ironic and solemn Your 4 letters Will change Love. Hate. Here. Gone. simplistic and short yet complex and infinite Baby to Wife Wife to Mama This is Your Four lettered Word pasted within Your incredulous Mind Your 4 letters. even you Will Hide. ****. Spic. Tard. Twit. oh no! no, no one can Know. Hide. Hide. Hide. no one Shall Know my Most precious Word ridiculed and cursed ashamed and misunderstood Hide From Your True Self Hide From That Four lettered Word in the end our 4 letters Will all be the Same no one can escape From This villainous Word It lingers the longest seared swiftly on the Soul This Foul Four lettered Word cursed Upon us all is Dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/29/2015 10:25:00 PM
Brian, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/24/2015 6:14:00 PM
Hi Brian, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Brian Byrne
Date: 12/9/2015 4:31:00 PM
Can you critique my work, I've noticed you give everyone a score of 7, so could you possibly look through my poems and tell me what you think?
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/26/2015 12:05:00 AM
Don't be afraid to show your work. The more you write, the more your work will improve. So keep writing, my friend! pandita
Date: 11/23/2015 10:57:00 PM
Hi Brian, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Brian Byrne
Date: 11/25/2015 11:10:00 AM
Thank you SKAT will do :)
Date: 11/23/2015 12:14:00 PM
- A great and unique first poem, I look forward to become more familiar with your poems in the future - Welcome to "The soup", Brian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brian Byrne
Date: 11/23/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/22/2015 10:04:00 PM
Please comment and rate. I want feedback please :)
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