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they say "hindsight is 20/20" is it easy to validate what is behind us like a storm that causes mass destruction and death get indemnity for what is lost, even when it's time? spring had sprung, winter clung no way to vitiate the damage being done as we sit inside looking out watching nothing but time passing by even shadows are stilled in silence while we stare across the horizon's edge at morning's rise and fall counting stars more than days just to fill the voids in life we patiently await for something more seeing our tears trickle from skies as our screams fall from birds gathering nearby volant in their freedom while we are caged trying to find our way out of this maze that 2020 has become... awaiting on hindsight 5/23/2020

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Date: 6/18/2020 9:28:00 PM
Great for a second read Sandy, now find me your best ever poem and enter my new contest!
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:37:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win.. This is wonderful and glorious. Loving every line passionately.
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:10:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win, Sandy.. A splendid write about our reality! Excellent imagery, my friend.. Your talent shines! Many blessings!
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Date: 5/30/2020 7:25:00 AM
Super piece Sandy, really so well penned with great imagery and expression. Hope all is well with you, Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:12:00 AM
Great poem and great win, well penned Sandy - 2020 will certainly go down in history books. Love and hugs,Jennifer.
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Date: 5/26/2020 9:56:00 PM
Nice to see you writing again, look what happens you write.. you win easy like that. congrats Sandy on a nice win!
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Date: 5/25/2020 5:26:00 PM
I think 2020 should be cancelled.... It's been the strangest year for s long and most devastating..
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Date: 5/25/2020 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a 2020 year so far. Hope it end on a great note. Enjoy your win and day.......
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Date: 5/25/2020 2:25:00 PM
Indeed! I believe that time will soon come when this year will be back to life lost in the pages of our history to turn back and remember our lessons. Congratulations on your win Sandra :)
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Date: 5/25/2020 12:19:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Sandy. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/25/2020 10:16:00 AM
Sandra, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! The last stanza is especially moving! Janice
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Date: 5/24/2020 7:51:00 PM
Hindsight IS 20/20... And ain't we got fun?! ~ Gloomy Doomy
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Date: 5/24/2020 11:17:00 AM
Sandy, your thoughts on 2020 are true for so many of us, just passing time, waiting to get past this, and being able to look back on a time we would really like to forget. We are all in this together, stay safe my friend. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/24/2020 7:00:00 AM
I like your take on the 2020 theme (2020 hindsight)..when we look back it will be a sad chapter in our history. Glad to see you back--writing poetry, Sandy.
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Date: 5/23/2020 10:04:00 PM
This is EXACTLY WRITE: "as we sit inside looking out watching nothing but time passing by" PERFECTLY describes what we are living through right now Sandra
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