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16 Year Old Me

You used to be alive More alive than the life that surrounded you Blinded by their lies That blood ain't thick anymore The apologies don't fit the new frame Time is god and you ain't wise to praise it The free neptunian been tricking you I'll send you a love letter from Saturn soon...

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Date: 1/23/2020 11:29:00 PM
This is a very well written poem. I really appreciate it.. :) well Could I request you to visit my website & read my poem? thank you..
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Date: 1/20/2020 12:39:00 AM
last three lines amazingly written; great expression; like it
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