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i held your feet, yet still you flew NO- i’ve never met a bird like you i dried your tears yet still you cried YES- hope would have been a better guide you grasped my hand, yet i let go O- i wish you knew the things i know you craved the rain, yet i saw sun, I SHALL- see your smile when the stars have spun your glass ran out of sand before I could prepare- BUT Sensing time amidst the storm proves there’s faith to share ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 4th of February 2020

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Date: 2/4/2020 10:59:00 PM
This is such a touching tale of loss and irrepressible faith. Well done!
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Date: 2/4/2020 3:04:00 PM
Very sad, Laura. But I like the positive ending.
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