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-tell Me, Does Anyone Really Care-

there can be no fun in what isn’t right, mankind fears what they don't understand and now laughter frees the tears- please, tell me, is anyone really there? and does anyone really care? why doesn’t the world see me as good? where is my gift when i have no voice, no verse can be written without notice and i don’t know how to heal i sacrificed h o u r s d a y s y e a r s all to find out i mean nothing- how do i appreciate my quill when my mind is fury intensified? please be my friend, drink coffee with me, i am not broken glass; i am better than what you think- i sit on a mountain and wonder why life gives me disappointment, now i know truth can’t be set free when the world seeks not atonement my fair skin pale from being bare- so, tell me… does anyone really care? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 2.10.20 Does Anyone Care Poetry Contest Emile Pinet

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/22/2020 10:03:00 PM

Everyone needs the companionship of others Luloo. Beautifully expressed. I am happy to know this is fictional. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Stay safe. xxoo

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/22/2020 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations Lu Loo! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very difficult contest to judge but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/10/2020 3:24:00 PM

I care. I would love to sit, talk and laugh over a cup of coffee. I would love to hear you laugh, Laura:) It seems as I get older, I find less to laugh about:(

Lu Loo
Date: 2/11/2020 3:01:00 PM

aww thanks dear friend, this was more fictional for the contest, but I would also love to drink coffee with you. we could talk about all the furbabies we've loved and lost :) thanks again x:-)