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-haven of Hope-

love’s gentle story began with you, solitude no more with sorrow dwindling- rising in the medallion morn next to your side, always wondering why you love me so... i am freefalling into a haven of hope, never seeking what was sought before; leaving doors closed to what used to be, for i have been following God’s plan- ~His plan for none but me~ saturated in sanctified seeds sown, knowing i shall never be alone i stay where i am- longing for nothing but the continuation of what i hold dear AND THAT IS YOU MY SWEET... i needed you before i knew you, craved you before i tasted love- embraced your soul at first glance, then you took my hand and said “i do” i gave one yellow rose that hot june day in 2001; the day i asked you to marry me- (baby, yes never sounded so good) thank you for your confidence in me, i can move mountains with your strength- free falling into a HAVEN OF HOPE 4.11.2020

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John Hamilton

Date: 4/26/2020 11:55:00 AM

Another beautiful write from your golden pen Lu loo, I hope this means you will touch us with your grace from time to time, at least a little consolation prize?

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 11:00:00 AM

I will stop by from time to time, I miss you John dearly. Thank you so much for everything. All our kindness, hope in me and compassion. Stay safe friend. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/13/2020 11:11:00 PM

Beautiful, Laura, I like the yellow rose you gave him to propose. congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Hugs Eve

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 11:00:00 AM

thank you sweet lady I appreciate your kind sentiments. (I am emailing you later fyi) Stay safe! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/13/2020 10:10:00 PM

A beautiful win and love story. Heaven and hope go together. Enjoy your week.......

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 10:59:00 AM

thank you dear Paula, you too! :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/12/2020 10:00:00 PM

Lovely said my friend...love has no bounds...hope you are keeping safe...Happy Easter...and best wishes from the Wingster :o)

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 10:59:00 AM

thank you Wingster :) be blessed and safe too :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/11/2020 10:05:00 PM

what a beautiful tribute to your husband and what a wonderful blessing to see a post from you, especially one so lovely... love this... Happy Easter my friend.... hugs and blessings

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 10:59:00 AM

happy belated Easter too! Be blessed and healthy- thank you lovely Sandy :)

John Watt

Date: 4/11/2020 5:03:00 PM

What a place to freefall into! Beautiful love story, Laura, so glad you shared it and happy I was lucky enough to bump into it today. I hope all is going well with you and loved ones. Hugs ~ John

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 10:58:00 AM

thank you dear friend! :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/11/2020 2:53:00 PM

Lovely LuLoo, he's lucky too. Happy Easter My Dear...

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 10:58:00 AM

Happy belated Easter! thanks sweet Charlie :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/11/2020 2:19:00 PM

Such a beautiful tribute to the love of your life, Luloo:-) Loved this. I'm glad you've decided to stick around!

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 10:58:00 AM

stick around here and there- thanks dear friend! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2020 1:56:00 PM

aww LuLoo I know your lovely Nick is your rock ad this is a lovely tribute to him:-) I too proposed to my hubby, I love you gave him a rose:-) happy Easter to you and your lovely family, great to see you back on soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 5/4/2020 10:57:00 AM

how sweet! I knew that too. Thanks lady :)-luloo