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-farewell My Beautiful Being-

to all who know and love, and who may not know at all, i have told tales of adoring loss and romance utterly grand- building walls with broken sills, falling apart at the seams to well, not knowing which path to choose but brilliantly radiating verses that weigh heavily upon hearts so i go toward the light that found me; bright and anew i am glowing in grace- gifts of love and hope i bestow, with gratitude i extend my heart though the threshold to peace has yet to be shown… i know i have grown i accept where i’ve been, showering others with my metaphorical muse- embracing poetry without fear; leaving behind friendly notions so that i can become the woman i've always longed to be- creative in my heart, talented in my essence, and giving to those deserving my utmost kindness- i sing my lullaby today and fly away farewell my beautiful being, i am too far away to express what i feel ~for goodbyes are all too real~ some say i am becoming, beautiful and unique- melancholy in my technique, loving to all who seek… MY SOUL few know my name, even fewer embrace my quill- but one day i shall shine like the stardust falling onto my barren feet (the feet that once carried me home) i shall no longer take the deceit, nor allow Judas to defeat… ME i am strength intensified- a push assumes its weakness is part of my fate, but there’s no regret in the magic I DID CREATE for my time has given me much pleasure- i hand out thanksgivings to all who were kind to… ME i may fly back once and awhile, to embrace amazing tales told, see companions of old- write verses of hope and pain; making my heart smile, adoring each style- but for now i must abstain wish upon my star, from afar, and all will be revealed in time- for nothing does compare to the rhythm of my rhyme farewell my beautiful being, may you touch what i leave behind- take my verses and wear my hope that tomorrow shall be better for… you and ME ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 3.2.20

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Date: 4/26/2020 11:52:00 AM
I am so saddened by this Lu loo, you are one of my faves here, you will be missed, so sorry that you have not been treated well, you are much too sincere of a person to be mistreated. I'm saddened for so many have left, I'm back sporadically, I'll just grin and bear it, maybe admin is learning from their mistakes. Sooo sad!!
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Date: 3/27/2020 3:02:00 AM
I come back after a break and find that my favourite poet is taking one, feeling sad, LuLoo:) love you and your creativity always:) remember you everytime I see that wonderful plaque:)
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Date: 3/20/2020 7:21:00 PM
I have come to know now, that if a poet declares they are leaving, I actually cry, truly you are one of the most beautiful poets on here, you show your heart as open, curse whoever has hurt it, love and blessings, Indiana . . .
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Date: 3/19/2020 11:25:00 AM
Lu Loo, Another voice and pen silenced. I've always enjoyed your candor, wit, and sincere poetry. Like your poem 'I Slipped On A Tear Drop' with beautiful worded lines 'I s l i p p e d in a puddle and I died in her soul. She never knew how much I needed her.' It doesn't get better than that. Fair Winds and Following Seas, 'til we meet again. -Richard
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Date: 3/18/2020 11:34:00 PM
Oh, Laura. You will be greatly missed especially by me. I sincerely hope you "may fly back once and awhile." That will be a great time to celebrate your sweet presence among us again. You remain in my thoughts and prayers. Be blessed always.
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Date: 3/18/2020 12:39:00 AM
LuLoo, I know St. Patrick's Day is a sad, sad day for you. I love the Beautiful Scars you have shared with your beloved Soup friends over the years. You are a shining star, "creative in my heart, talented in my essence, and giving to those deserving my utmost kindness-". My heart aches today to hear of your departure. You have been what attracts many to this website: gifted, generous, transparent. May God be with you and bless you always. Hugs ~ John (in tears)
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Date: 3/16/2020 1:24:00 PM
Hi Lu Loo I do not know you but have liked what you write. Continue to write. Just stay on poetry soup and write and visit when you can. All the best to you!
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Date: 3/13/2020 8:18:00 PM
Oh no! This place won't be the same without you, Luloo. I absolutely adore you as person and as a brilliant poetess. You're one of my favorite people here and it was such a pleasure collaborating with you on "To The One I Long For". I'll be including it in the poetry manuscript I'm currently working on. I'm sorry you feel disillusioned enough to leave PS. I hope you reconsider. Sure, take a break, Luloo, but please don't leave for good:-(
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Date: 3/11/2020 8:22:00 AM
Hi Lu A beautiful love story said with much rhythm!
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Date: 3/6/2020 4:34:00 PM
Lu Loo, i wanted to Soupmail you to find out what is wrong, but I just read something underneath here that looks like I would not be able to get through to you. If you can email me, I would appreciate knowing what happened. Anyway, I am sorry you have felt injured here. You have contributed so much here with beautiful poetry and with inspiring contests. And I will never forget the pretty wall plaque I got from you! thanks so much, Laura.
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Date: 3/6/2020 4:20:00 PM
Dear Lu Loo, this is very sad indeed. I a speechless. You have such a pure heart. You will be missed terribly. You have made SO many friends over your reign here at the Soup. Hopefully you will reconsider.
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Date: 3/4/2020 5:06:00 PM
My heart aches at your words my dear beautiful friend. May your words come back with joy and fulfill with happiness and wisdom. I love your work and every time I look at your words on my plaque you gifted me I think of you, as it sits in my gallery of art with my own works. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/3/2020 12:22:00 PM
- Terribly sad, Lu Loo :(
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/3/2020 2:33:00 PM
don't be sad for me, I have many ventures yet to pursue in my young life. Much more me yet to be discovered. Thanks sweet Smile :)
Date: 3/2/2020 2:13:00 PM
Not you too LuLoo, what the hell is going on. I must be the most naïve one at the soup. Or the least observant. Please reconsider for the sake of all of us who have come to enjoy your company for so long. You will be missed...
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/3/2020 12:28:00 PM
thanks Charlie, I appreciate your kindness. It was nice to read this from you today. You are one of the true poets here, I always knew that. Be blessed :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2020 3:16:00 AM
Another friend will be posting his final poem soon, I don;t know why luloo is stopping posting but I know his reasons and until admin address issues it will continue to lose poets who have been loyal to the site for many years:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/2/2020 11:50:00 AM
I don't know what has prompted this poem LuLoo but I am saddened you feel compelled to leave due to I presume is to the actions of a 'judas', I am fed up of issues on the site especially with blogs but rest assured I am here to stay, Take time out by all means but please reconsider leaving soup, :-( hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/3/2020 2:36:00 PM
btw Jan, I haven't been able to get into my soupamil in a month (yet one more issue I keep having) so please email me anytime. :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/3/2020 12:27:00 PM
like I said, all will be revealed in time sweet lady. I finally opened my eyes to see what atrocious people can do to someone. I don't deserve how I've been treated by this site. No one knows my reasons except admin. So if you all hear any rumors they came NOT from me or anyone else. It would be obvious admin is a joke if anyone knows. I do hope they get their stuff together and fix the issues here. Hence, why I can't be a part of something that doesn't respect me as a poet, or woman. I thought I would grow old here on PS, but not now. Maybe I'll be back, maybe not. Who knows. My business is taking off like crazy so my time is limited anyways. Mama needs to bring home the bacon! lol Thanks Jan, I hope we can keep in touch. hugs from me :)

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