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her reflection, -brilliant- a beautiful traced etch of a midnight silhouette, as the eclipsed moonlight glistened forgiveness gave her reason, as did the way the mirror listened her delicate nature frees her- left topsy-turvy when shadows creep in her humble haven gazing at her amazing eyes that surface her depth- no longer forsaken nor graven she has no wealth in riches, none in the flesh resides- wishes to see the world feeding life with harmonious affluence protection from pain emanating- purification rests in her soul – like rivers cascading devoid filth; no more effluence later i shall see her radiance when the stardust surges- arising into the darkness to alleviate all the ones who rescued her and kept her soul safe she does appreciate gliding along and floating into an abyss of natural seasons- the hues of her humble heart christened her reflection- -brilliant- as the eclipsed moon glistened ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 30th January 2020

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Date: 1/31/2020 5:14:00 AM
Brilliant indeed! You never fail to amaze me, Luloo:-) Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 1/31/2020 10:42:00 AM
thank you sweet friend, blessings x:-)
Date: 1/31/2020 12:25:00 AM
Lu Loo, Love the rhyming format and your beautiful language of images! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/31/2020 10:42:00 AM
thank you dear Sam! x:-)

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