- Soothing Breeze -

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19.07.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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The kiss and warm embrace one single moan from the soothing breeze gets up playfully Waves of ecstasy on tanned warm skin enjoying the moment of pure bliss and joy Curious butterfly brushes my cheek Brief rush of sweet feeling moment of silence which was truly divine

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Perry Campanella

Date: 7/29/2023 1:53:00 PM

Anne-Lise your words paint this photo you picked - I feel your emotion in that lovely imagery your words evoke - Thank You & Good Luck - stay safe too! Perry C.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/23/2023 4:43:00 PM

Lovely poetry Anne-Lise, “truly Devine” as was your “moment of silence”… Belle

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/23/2023 5:28:00 AM

So lovely:)

Leotis Hargrove

Date: 7/21/2023 9:11:00 PM

Anne-Lise. Thank you for this work of art! Thank you for blessing us with your gift. The line's that caught me "The kiss and warm embrace, one single moan." Keep up the great work! Good luck with the contest!

Valsa George

Date: 7/20/2023 8:42:00 PM

Beautiful and magical, both the poem and the image. I feel the soft touch of the same breeze that caressed and brushed against you. All the Best dear Anne....

Bill Baker

Date: 7/20/2023 3:57:00 PM

Your poem, "Soothing Breeze was indeed soothing, Anne-Lise. Hugs, Bill

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/20/2023 11:55:00 AM

Utterly charming and full of visceral delight Anne-Lise! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings and hugs for this beautiful moment of bliss and joy!