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- How Does a Writer Let Go -

with plenty of pain i seem to be comfortable weeping in silence, but the tumbleweeds sway in the mist of spring, and i pray for a way to redeem mother nature’s embrace; for she believes in what i need to long for willows weep for the loss of their blades, chestnut tears leave stains on barren branches, and here i am left alone in a forest too green to see; flashes of lightning scour my deliverance, for i am but a nonetheless notion, full of the kind of resentment satirical apparitions face i crave bright smiles with shiny white teeth- ivory as strong as steel so i can swallow the sore syllables my lips have spoken manic metaphors with a caticalysm of undying rhyme; enough rhyme to ease my soul for I am but a writer, hungry for a way to let go ***** January 17, 2020

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Date: 1/17/2020 9:43:00 PM
This is amazing Laura, kind of reminds me of....if you want to know send me a mail, believe me it's a compliment!
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Date: 1/18/2020 10:16:00 AM
i'll get back with you as soon as I can! I am definitely interested...x:-)-luloo
Date: 1/17/2020 9:42:00 AM
Wow...this is awesome. That last line is brilliant.
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Date: 1/18/2020 10:16:00 AM
many thanks Midnight, appreciate it! x:-)-luloo
Date: 1/17/2020 9:13:00 AM
Wow <3
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Date: 1/18/2020 10:15:00 AM
thank you sweet Maureen x:-)-luloo

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