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- Haiku X 290 - Leaf Dance -

                                         of dizzy autumn
                                    in dark honey reflection -
                                          were kissed by plum lips

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Kelly Deschler Date: 9/9/2023 6:55:00 PM The beauty of the autumn season can be both dazzling and dizzying at the same time ... You capture such wonders and share them with us all in this lovely poem :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/4/2023 1:01:00 PM Wow!! How interesting is this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by. Sara Login to Reply

Nancy Kaufman Date: 9/1/2023 7:22:00 AM Wow Anne Lise, I love the metaphor as well as the imagery and also the simplicity of you're haiku. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/31/2023 6:38:00 PM A beautiful image of a fall leaf! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/1/2023 12:29:00 AM - Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/31/2023 2:22:00 PM A dizzy autumn that will make us spin like a dervish lol, your enrich my life when I read you Anne :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/1/2023 12:30:00 AM - Many thanks ... a pleasure to share with you, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 8/31/2023 10:58:00 AM Nice haiku. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 11:02:00 AM - Thank you, Jay :) - hugs

Joseph May Date: 8/31/2023 7:39:00 AM I enjoyed this haiku Anne, Very nicely penned Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 8:57:00 AM - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs

Sally Eslinger Date: 8/31/2023 6:23:00 AM Luscious vision! Must make this a Fav, Anne-Lise, because it has truly, TRULY given me a new & lasting way of not only seeing but Feeling autumn as i will see& feel it soon. Here, your 17 syllables in 3 lines present a sort of life-size diorama…Fantastic fantasy! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 7:03:00 AM - Autumn has arrived ... the colors provide inspiration, Sally :) - Thank you so much for comment and fave :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh Date: 8/31/2023 4:02:00 AM Wow. I love this! Amazing writing. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 7:02:00 AM - Many thanks, Gina ... a pleasure to share with you :) - hugs

Akkina Downing Date: 8/30/2023 7:03:00 PM Oh my gosh, this is just stunning!! I just chewed on my lips, maybe they’ll turn plummier. Lol. I love love it. My fave too :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 7:01:00 AM - Plump lips can be bought... but they look like beaks... plum lips are sweet and juicy, Akkina :) - Thank you so much for comment and fave :) - hugs

Yann Rolland Date: 8/30/2023 4:02:00 PM amazing and delicious haiku, enjoyed the moment Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 6:57:00 AM - Thank you so much, Yann :) - hugs

Jan Allison Date: 8/30/2023 2:35:00 PM you always write amazing haiku sweet Anne- Lise, this is a true gem:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 6:56:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs

Heidi Sands Date: 8/30/2023 1:28:00 PM Oh, this is so sweet. I am happy to be led to it today. Beautifully written :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2023 6:55:00 AM - Many thanks, Heidi ... a pleasure to share with you :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/30/2023 1:18:00 PM what a gem!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/30/2023 1:20:00 PM - Thank you so much, Andrea :) - hugs