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08.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

2nd place in the contest

Cupid nacreous clouds Cradled near setting sun Creamy temple pillars Cyprus grow in spirals Cloud nine is for lovers Clasp me close in your arms Closer to the divine

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/15/2023 6:03:00 PM

Creatively descriptive, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Scott

Date: 9/15/2023 12:11:00 AM

Oh this is wonderful: "Cloud nine is for lovers Clasp me close in your arms Closer to the divine" I like I like :-))

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 7:11:00 AM

Each line is enchanting Anne-Lise. :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/13/2023 10:48:00 PM

"Creamy temple pillars", loved that line dear Anne. Congratulations on your win. So glad to see you active here. Hugs..~ Ani

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2023 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Very descriptive one about clouds. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Terry Miller

Date: 9/12/2023 1:04:00 AM

I love it; congratulations.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/11/2023 10:04:00 PM

This is such a beautiful write and a wonderful take on the 'Clouds' theme Pleiades.. I especially love "creamy temple pillars", "cloud nine is for lovers" Ahh, you've woven such a myriad vision within such few words.. Amazing! :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/11/2023 1:03:00 PM

Congratulations Anne-Lise! Clever, lover's on cloud 9---their heads in the clouds, My favorite.

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 8:39:00 AM

Very nicely done Anne, Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for my win in your contest and you congrats, Joseph :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 9/11/2023 5:06:00 AM

“Cloud nine is for lovers” how clever is that line. I love this pleiades. Another brilliant and creative write from you, as always. So much depth in every line

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:08:00 AM

- Ink, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/10/2023 6:31:00 PM

First of this form I read, and it is very much enchanting. Fabulous in my book for the contest :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:07:00 AM

- Akkina, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/10/2023 1:15:00 PM

A beauteous poem and picture, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/9/2023 4:40:00 PM

Love this dear Anne- Lise. Fantastic imagery and immaculate chosen words that fit so well together. Perfect! Hugs to you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:07:00 AM

- Christina, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 9/9/2023 2:01:00 AM

This is indeed a masterpiece of Pleiades. Loved the imagery and the terrific flow of your poem. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:06:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/8/2023 11:43:00 PM

Cupid's clouds, very creative, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:06:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jo :) - hugs

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/8/2023 5:06:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem so much. Sunsets are for lovers.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:06:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jerry :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/8/2023 4:18:00 PM

-- the spirals, the fluffy, colorful imagination's pinkish cotton taffy -- one's choice to stretch either logical or daffy. It's all free! Divine writing.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:05:00 AM

- Joe, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/8/2023 3:53:00 PM

Close to heart with love...So lovely sweet lady.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:05:00 AM

- Charma, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 9/8/2023 3:49:00 PM

lovely pleidaes Anne- Lise I do enjoy reading these poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:04:00 AM

- Jan, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/8/2023 3:26:00 PM

Very nice, leading up to the final romance!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/8/2023 2:37:00 PM

Cordial!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:04:00 AM

- Abdullah, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/8/2023 1:34:00 PM

you have a very romantic spirit, dear poet

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:03:00 AM

- Frederic, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/8/2023 12:43:00 PM

Cupid, cradled, creamy--words adorning your poem bring forth the images for the reader. Splendidly written and succinctly delivered, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2023 1:27:00 PM

- Vijay, thanks for reading and lovely comment - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/8/2023 12:08:00 PM

I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, Anne! It is truly enchanting, with the 'C' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present your exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating, adding a touch of beauty to the whole poem"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2023 1:26:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs