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08.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May 

2nd place in the contest

 

Cupid nacreous clouds Cradled near setting sun Creamy temple pillars Cyprus grow in spirals Cloud nine is for lovers Clasp me close in your arms Closer to the divine

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Date: 9/15/2023 6:03:00 PM
Creatively descriptive, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 9/15/2023 12:11:00 AM
Oh this is wonderful: "Cloud nine is for lovers Clasp me close in your arms Closer to the divine" I like I like :-))
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Date: 9/14/2023 7:11:00 AM
Each line is enchanting Anne-Lise. :)
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Date: 9/13/2023 10:48:00 PM
"Creamy temple pillars", loved that line dear Anne. Congratulations on your win. So glad to see you active here. Hugs..~ Ani
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Date: 9/12/2023 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Very descriptive one about clouds. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/12/2023 1:04:00 AM
I love it; congratulations.
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Date: 9/11/2023 10:04:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write and a wonderful take on the 'Clouds' theme Pleiades.. I especially love "creamy temple pillars", "cloud nine is for lovers" Ahh, you've woven such a myriad vision within such few words.. Amazing! :)
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Date: 9/11/2023 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations Anne-Lise! Clever, lover's on cloud 9---their heads in the clouds, My favorite.
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:39:00 AM
Very nicely done Anne, Congrats on your win
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 1:09:00 AM
- Many thanks for my win in your contest and you congrats, Joseph :) - hugs
Date: 9/11/2023 5:06:00 AM
“Cloud nine is for lovers” how clever is that line. I love this pleiades. Another brilliant and creative write from you, as always. So much depth in every line
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:08:00 AM
- Ink, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/10/2023 6:31:00 PM
First of this form I read, and it is very much enchanting. Fabulous in my book for the contest :) hugs
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:07:00 AM
- Akkina, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/10/2023 1:15:00 PM
A beauteous poem and picture, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Evelyn :) - hugs
Date: 9/9/2023 4:40:00 PM
Love this dear Anne- Lise. Fantastic imagery and immaculate chosen words that fit so well together. Perfect! Hugs to you
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:07:00 AM
- Christina, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/9/2023 2:01:00 AM
This is indeed a masterpiece of Pleiades. Loved the imagery and the terrific flow of your poem. Hugs.
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 11:43:00 PM
Cupid's clouds, very creative, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Jo :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 5:06:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem so much. Sunsets are for lovers.
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Jerry :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 4:18:00 PM
-- the spirals, the fluffy, colorful imagination's pinkish cotton taffy -- one's choice to stretch either logical or daffy. It's all free! Divine writing.
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:05:00 AM
- Joe, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 3:53:00 PM
Close to heart with love...So lovely sweet lady.
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:05:00 AM
- Charma, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 3:49:00 PM
lovely pleidaes Anne- Lise I do enjoy reading these poems:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:04:00 AM
- Jan, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 3:26:00 PM
Very nice, leading up to the final romance!
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:04:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 2:37:00 PM
Cordial!
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:04:00 AM
- Abdullah, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 1:34:00 PM
you have a very romantic spirit, dear poet
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:03:00 AM
- Frederic, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 12:43:00 PM
Cupid, cradled, creamy--words adorning your poem bring forth the images for the reader. Splendidly written and succinctly delivered, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 9/8/2023 1:27:00 PM
- Vijay, thanks for reading and lovely comment - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
Date: 9/8/2023 12:08:00 PM
I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, Anne! It is truly enchanting, with the 'C' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present your exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating, adding a touch of beauty to the whole poem"
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Date: 9/8/2023 1:26:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs