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In a drifted breeze — we parachute a misted fog enveloped cutting deep words tripped up lost mementos moving on with or without me

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Fj Thomas

Date: 4/10/2018 1:11:00 PM

I feel sadness here. Beautiful Tim.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/9/2018 2:28:00 PM

An untitled poem ... very intriguing, Tim! This poetic beaut caught my eye for sure. Ty for taking us on a para-sail flight. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy.

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/8/2018 9:23:00 AM

So effortless and beautiful!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/8/2018 2:25:00 AM

Oh so very deep, and I might guess historic!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/7/2018 9:03:00 PM

Helloe Tim, here is another hug from me. Have a nice evening my friend.

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/6/2018 10:39:00 PM

Awe, sad on Tim... sending a warm hug :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2018 3:14:00 PM

- - - ..... - - - ... hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/6/2018 2:49:00 PM

tender and melancholy, tim... good one!.. huggs

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/6/2018 2:31:00 PM

Deeply sad Tim. Well written expression of feelings!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2018 1:35:00 PM

beautiful but sad imagery Tim hugs jan xx