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Lucius Begot Luci

When Hofmann stumbled across a new synapse,
serotonin underwrote a dopamine contract.
Cuddle or cringe, carnival or calamity,
worlds in one potent punch squared.
Blotter art doesn't pursue gallery status
rather to dissolve into a cerebral canvas,
with a sometimes recess from what is seen.

Lucy shut my eyes with a seven-hour kiss,
her slow caress gave me a new skin
that no shower could make clean.
Kaleidoscope giggles shatter reality
tickling permanent change, but on that night,
I felt the moon plummet and explode into a dawn
so that the sun could take it all away.

Copyright © Rob Carmack | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 1/25/2025 4:39:00 PM

Rob, I really like this poem! It seems to take one on a psychophysiological trip and reminds me of the infamous song "Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds." I don't experiment with drugs anymore, but your narrative takes me back to another time. Best wishes, Thomas
Date: 1/6/2025 8:53:00 PM

The second verse was easier for me to get. I really liked that one, Rob
Date: 1/6/2025 8:39:00 AM

Dear rob, youv written an excellent poem that depicts how an individual would feel or what they see with psychedelic. Which is very clever and creative take! I especially love the lines “ I felt the moon plummet and explode into a dawn so that the sun could take it all away.” An excellent end to your well woven poem! Absolutely love little details so artistically woven into this! Impeccable! Pleasure reading this! Wishing you a wonderful 2025! Hope this year treats you and your loved ones well
Date: 1/5/2025 8:51:00 AM

Radient and yet vacumed into the sun.' Rob I shall go over it again.'
Date: 12/22/2024 7:55:00 AM

Cool psychedelic poem, Rob.
Date: 11/30/2024 11:25:00 AM

Hoffman discoverer of LSD. This must be an entry for the psychedelic contest, and what an eloquent entry tis . Love it! Good to meet you, Rob. Kaleidoscope giggles
Date: 11/25/2024 1:19:00 PM

I've read this three times and have been unable to see the connection between stanzas one and two, though I'm sure there is one. I'm a little slow. That having been said, stanza two is way cool!

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