Unconcealed Poems | Examples

Premium Member Carnival Date

It was nineteen-eighty and I felt great -
off to the carnival with Brenda on a date. 
Am I really going out with this beauty?
Showing her a good time - that was my duty.
Under the stars, on the intramural field,
her excitement for the rides was unconcealed.
The stars and lights flashed in her pretty eyes -
it was like fireworks exploding in the skies, 
but I was looking at a lot more than that - 
and was hoping for more than rides and a chat.
For her fun was a ride on a Ferris wheel,
but I was all wrapped up in her sex appeal. 
We were together, but on a different page,  
The rides scared me - upside down in a cage!
My goodness, that was forty-five years ago.
I wish I could have shared her experience, though.  
And that was my first and last date with Brenda, 
a boy and a girl with a different agenda.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Muskerry Spring

At Lough Allua, along the waterfront
One observes a turning of the tide
From river stones, which stay blunt
Are nature’s creatures, who needn’t hide

A little toad searches for anew
Commencing a journey made by few
Its passage, grows so weary
Following the gravel track
On its way to Ballingeary

High ditches cloak edges of the roads
Serving to both sides, a useful shield
Tender branches break against the cars
And one peers through leaves, into a field
To spot vibrant hydrangeas, unconcealed

Yet across the rugged boundary
One can hear the mud clumps crack
With a sand-tinted Hereford bull
Rolling around on his back

Retiring into a pond
Atop the Shehy Mountains
The land in Spring, it is so fond
When in the creases of these hills
The emerging sun shines through the petals
Of those lovely daffodils
Form: Rhyme


Petal

The Petal is a bud
That opens to a bloom
It blossoms with the Sun
On Summer afternoons

When Climate freezes Day
It’s easier for Men
To know why Petals wither 
– Theirs to understand

But when Summer is at hand
And Noon upon the Day
Men can but exclaim
With unconcealed dismay
When the blooming flower 
Folds and fades away

But for Frost within the root
And Chill within the stem 
– These cannot be ascertained
By Petal or by Man
Form: Rhyme

SOURCES OF INSPIRATION

Inspiration is something
That can be hard to sought.
But motivation it shall bring
When it is caught in thought.

Endless sources of it there
To broaden up your mind.
They are out there everywhere
Waiting for you to find.

Mindset is a primary factor...
Is yours willing to
Be open and play the extractor?
This is up to you.

What you know plays special forces
On this battlefield.
Imagination in its courses...
Make it unconcealed.

What are you into? What moves you?
What is it you desire?
Anything certain proves to
Be something to inspire.

People leading by example...
Places you have been.
Objects plentiful and ample...
All that you have seen.

Experience can play a role
And also what you learn.
Progressing towards a goal
As well as what you yearn.

These are just to name a few
Sources which do exist.
Everything comes down to you
And your will to persist.
Form: Rhyme

Dandelion little bud

Dandelion little bud soon will have a golden crown,
taller this is bound to grow
 upwards, skywards to our sun, 
now ripened with blossom wide, unconcealed, too bold to hide,
 until the time is right to leave... 
though death is a mere bluff,
 evolving to a special stage transforming to fine fluff!
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Harvesting

Put Youself In Their Shoes Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
Placed 1st
______________________________________________________

It was late August, during summer break,
We went to our grandma’s village called Snake.	
She had a small house beside a big lake;	 	
She was known to people as Mrs. Blake.

She liked to live in the village alone;
There she loved to live a life of her own.
In her little field, corn seeds, she had sown;
That time to its full size the crop had grown.

Around the field, there was a mountain range…	
There we went for harvesting for a change,
Not expecting anything in exchange.
As we were novices the work looked strange!

We worked since morning till evening untired; 
The art of harvesting we had acquired.
Our work in the fields everyone admired;
The children of the village got inspired.

After the work, we returned from the field;
People welcomed us with smiles unconcealed.
And honored us by giving us a shield;
To them our whereabouts grandma revealed.



   Picture: 3
   Date of posting the poem: 8/16/2023
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Skin Unconcealed

"All a man really wants, is a girl who looks good in a bikini." - Jack Freestone

Hot white sand sticks,
tingles the salacious sense
of beach-braced feeling,
clad in skimpy bikini.

Out of the blue the golden sun gilds 
the skin unconcealed,
lubricious assets fix attention focus,
the imagination latitude narrows. 

The construct of the consummate mind,
the unsculpted bikini body beguiles.

Premium Member Kestrel

Corn is harvested and hay neatly bailed
Indian summer hovers over field
Wind frolicker dived smoothly then impaled
Unwary creature who was unconcealed.

Small bird of prey with beautiful feathers
Keen-eyed Kestrel looking for easy prey
Golden autumn simmers perfect weather
Mammals scatter in rush to get away

Kestrel is focused gliding back and forth
Harvested field's microcosm of zest
Onlooker gripped by sadness and remorse
But Nature as always ever knows best.

Kestrel is formidable bird of prey
Wind frolickers will always 'seize the day'.


 'K' Words 
Poetry Contest
Chosen Word: Kestrel
Sponsored 
by: 
Constance La France 
10/03/2023



Pixabay Image by: VanZonneveld
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Melancholy

O Melancholy, my home-alone friend,
with Indolence conspiring to mark time,
with best intentions, and thoughts unpenned,
and faded vision, as the perfect rhyme,
so almost, so not quite, so very close,
distracted by my wastrel amigos.

If I could somehow loosen ties that bind,
and hold me in such unrelenting thrall,
if I the secret antidote could find,
to let me hear again the muse’s call,
my mind, now free, a-roving, unconcealed,
my deepest unsung thoughts in verse revealed.

Unending sojourn, inspiration sought,
and sometimes unexpectedly upturned.
When with the souls of poets we have walked,
their intimations shared, insights discerned,
if we, as in a dream, a trance adopt,
we too may tread their lofty mountaintop.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Spare Me Disaffected Trolls

Spare me the agonizing of disaffected trolls
Who find nothing of substance worthy of note,
Desperately seeking a modicum of control
Their unconcealed nastiness a matter of rote.

Have they nothing better to do with their time
Than to criticize the successes of legitimate poets
Who, themselves, have difficulty making a rhyme,
But coming up with a dig, they promptly throw it.

Let’s preserve Poetry Soup from this pitiful type
Who comes here only to stir and create turmoil,
Making sure not to give them impetus or hype
In another place may they find more welcome soil.

Doing all we can to maintain peace and goodwill
Let’s keep Poetry Soup free of fractious voices,
Being careful not to engage in avoidable overkill,
But never failing to silence disconcerting noises.

Written May 17, 2022
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Underwear

Underwear so varied
Unpublished, well, not now
Unconcealed, all can view
Uncovered, unashamed
Unblushing for the world
Unfurled, unblocked designs
Unchaste attitude girls  

And boys/men

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5Unblushing for the world 6
6Unfurled, unblocked designs 6
7Unchaste attitude girls 6



Contest: Pleiades U
Date: 04/30/2021
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

Of Pan and Man

Of PAN and MAN

Beyond the hedgerow bright with bloom of May
Our daily lives move on with purpose strong 
From where the thrush and warbler sing the day
Soft hum of traffic, plays a different song

The tawny herd lies sleepy-eyed in sun
On lush green mead oblivious to where
The cars, the trucks and buses onward run
With each disposed by one of nature’s heirs

Along the roadside verges, now revealed
In rainbow hues, wild flowers exquisite face
Uncaring road’s dismissal unconcealed
Though passers glance admiring of their grace

To count less the works of man than of Pan, some are fain 
Let us bless them all and embrace as our whole domain
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member True Love

Whenever I look up to the heavens,
your smile and beauty is all I can see.
I guess I will never quite understand,
just what in the world that you see in me.

Somehow you just seem to keep me guessing,
and always coming back and wanting more.
I do know that I have never quite felt,
anything even close, to this before.

I promise that I will always love you,
a little more each and every day.
With all of the passion that we have shared,
I know our blue skies will never turn gray.

My heart was broken and left unconcealed,
because of you my love, it now is healed.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member The Passion

full of emotion
       pulsating
       brooding
       heaving
parsed
           by desire
with
      feelings
              of the heart
a
   voyage
             of discovery
poignant
aglow
       audacious
                 & 
            breathless
an intuitive
                tableaux
with
gestures
      explicit
        &
       visible
                 flooding
the moment

    overflowing
             frantic
!onging to
               give
floating
 in uncharted
                    seas
to a love
              afire
...
    to
       savour

sensuous
   burning
    with fiery
         passion
a consuming
         flame

driven to despair
all
   peace of mind
              no more
wounded
    deeply tortured
without
the semblance
            of reality

mediocrity

a silent shadow
on
circumstance

suddenly

             hope
in a sense of beauty

unforced earnestness
conceived

a state
      of fermentation
vivacious
    &
      exciting
what bliss
what delight
              free
              unconcealed

to know love
&
stand amazed
Form: Verse

Premium Member Common Intoxication

Unable to let feelings come to just slide by,
all poets feel life in tender seeing eyes.
Life marinates in a poet's empathy-rife heart,
to then cradle lay emotion in their core
until every angle of feel has been stored.
All a poet reality-feels is written unconcealed
as is somehow required of and for their zeal.


If a poet lives it, they give it deliberate depth
for such is essential to their very breath.
Poets wear a same colored, large-sized bruise
from years of hearing devastating world news.
New's blues lights many a poet's tender fuse.
Empathy demands a poet's sympathy clarity.
Poets take from piles of desperate density
to hopefully give it credible, helpful intensity.

Love, birth, death, life's complexities and simplicities
charge poetic awe, humor and emotional flexibilities.





... CayCay Jennings
May 8, 2018
Form: Rhyme

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