Best Surprise Poems
Contest SurpriseI wrote a poem for a contest
And it got some great comments
I thought it was one of my best
I felt very confident
Soon the contest was judged, the winning list came out
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Categories:
surprise, anxiety,
Form:
Rhyme
Kayak Fishing SurpriseOle Les set out by kayak from the shore
Big blue marlin rose from the ocean floor
Nipped his bait, gave Les a tow
Water-logged craft sank below
Friends shook their heads and said, "No Les, no more"
4/27/2011
Written for John Freeman's "Fishing" limerick contest
Okay, the...
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Categories:
surprise, funny, sea
Form:
Limerick
The Birthday SurpriseToday it’s Sally’s birthday party; she’s the star of the show
She’s a lovely little girl and all her friends are invited to go
They arrive on the doorstep with presents in their hand
Wearing their best clothes, oh don’t they look so grand
Excited children are entertained by...
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Categories:
surprise, birthday, kids, fun, magic,
Form:
Couplet
A Surprise GiftA summer kiss on winter night
precious gift enough to ignite
my teenage mind with burning flame
a neighbouring dame with sweet name
a cage-free bird on its first flight.
Many years ago but still bright
in my mind like day's first sunlight
and how I enjoyed when it came
a summer kiss.
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Categories:
surprise, passion, romance, sweet, winter,
Form:
Rondeau
Surprise Factor(Why I'm Still Breathing)
When the cow was dry, she was compliant.
When she calved, she turned vicious
and no fence could hold her,
but she gave milk in abundance,
and Dad refused to sell her.
She chased Mother 'round and 'round the barn
until Mom panicked, climbed the corner logs,
and perched...
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Categories:
surprise, animal, childhood, family, farm,
Form:
Narrative
Complete SurpriseI didn't think I'd ever get to date you,
you were always busy with other things.
And I thought the stories I'd heard were true;
you were a full-fledged bird flexing her wings.
Not a caged canary who sweetly sings;
but a hawk, keen for the thrill the hunt brings.
You...
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Categories:
surprise, anxiety, beautiful, dance, feelings,
Form:
Sonnet
Maurice Gets a SurpriseBy Elton Camp
For the entirety of his married life
Maurice had been ruled by his wife
For anything that happened to occur
He had no choice but to answer to her
Just ordering him around wasn’t enough
Since Zelda was often violent and rough
Any disagreement she’d always win
Even if she...
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Categories:
surprise, humor,
Form:
Rhyme
A Wonderful SurpriseGifted a premium membership
I want to do a joyful backflip
But that may cause great harm
A sincere thanks with charm
Effort to write more I shall let rip
January 10, 2020...
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Categories:
surprise, happiness, thanks,
Form:
Limerick
The Big SurpriseAn adventurous lad named Ling,
By chance he found a talking ring.
Then a big surprise,
Right before his eyes,
It became a bird that could sing!...
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Categories:
surprise, beach, bird, boy, funny,
Form:
Limerick
To the Surprise of the SeaTo The Surprise of The Sea
In place of me
There is you
You stand before me
Open door
In this light
The light of you
Makes of me
More for you
And the rolling eventide misses a beat
In forty minutes
Lost itself to a voice which spoke like centuries
With memories
They are love
Playing hand in...
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Categories:
surprise, love
Form:
Free verse
SurpriseMama's surprise child —
from our beds we shout out names
like the Walton’s did
7/10/2019
Chantelle Cooke’s Childhood Memories Poetry Contest
Since you had one slot left I wrote a short one...
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Categories:
surprise, baby,
Form:
Haiku
The Project
Son's science quest,
insect nest finds;
school's best project.
Saves in his room.
Wakes to doom when
with gloom, he cries.
Hundreds now crawl.
Every wall sports
hatched small mantes.
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Categories:
surprise, humorous, school, science,
Form:
Than-Bauk
Deep Purple VioletDeep Purple Violet
Deep purple Violet – hiding and quiet –
Beneath the forest greens;
Carefully we search for you
Or your dainty face hidden – not seen.
Nestled in a quiet place -
Modest in many hues -
Amethyst, purple, sometimes mauve,
A joyful surprise finding you.
Date: 1/28/19
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Categories:
surprise, beauty, flower, garden, joy,
Form:
Rhyme
Where Are We HeadedWhere are we headed? I know not where
Where are we headed? I know not why
Where are we headed? I know not how
Where are we headed? I know not to whom
Is it better to know or not to know?
Is it better on my own or with...
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Categories:
surprise, change, courage, fate, life,
Form:
Rhyme
Yours FaithfullyYOURS FAITHFULLY
I know with all my heart and being,
That I don’t know everything,
How can one think they are so wise,
If you do, you’re in for a surprise!
Only One knows our future, our fate,
Smell the coffee before it’s too late,
Confess Kneel down on bended knee,
And He...
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Categories:
surprise, faith,
Form:
Couplet