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Young Love

A young girl weeping salty tears staining her face young man not coming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2018 1:20:00 AM
Pun intented in the last line? Nice one to read and enjoy. Still waiting for Godot...
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/7/2018 6:16:00 PM
Just wanting to know how responders would react to the last line. You have been the only one to notice.
Date: 5/5/2018 5:03:00 PM
Oh so sad! Great haiku, Carlos! :)
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/6/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Laura. Young hearts are very tender.

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