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You came

You came When my life is a cloud of darkness void of light I feel so dull but you came with an energy so bright Your frequent smiles fly me to a world unknown Where we hold hands to feel a spark tone My songs have never known You heated my cold heart with your beauty A wonder you made with little winkles I fell terribly to the pit of affection that twinkles I am a soul, not the stone I was before My heart race to the core That I can't control nor stop, yet I still long for more

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Date: 4/3/2025 2:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/29/2025 2:46:00 PM
Me too. I love winkles and twinkles rhyme! Thanks for sharing!
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