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You Are Commendably Beautiful

You are commendably beautiful, If beauty were time, you'd be eternity, Your seductive smile is a problem for solution. A twinkle that can only be shown in your eyes, The sparkle in your beautiful eyes, provides the object of endless commentary. It burns like blazing fire, Just as I have loved you like a moth to a flam. I came once looking for your soul, Now captured by tormented dreams, Believing I'm climbing higher, Intensity enfeeble me When you speak my name in ecstasy. Whispering ancient songs unsung, With the rhythm of my rhyme. Rapture fills the air When I see you standing there. I never want it to end A warmth exuding as your own private fountain. It feels so good the way it takes over and over again. __________________________________________ Thank you for reading. Chitta.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/29/2012 5:17:00 AM
You must be a wery romantic man Chitta, soooo sweet written poems you do. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:42:00 AM
You write great romance poetry. Smooth. :) Gwendolen
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