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You are always on my mind contest

chaos reigns when obsessed bias chains do oppress follow crumbs, they lead to you please succumb, I'd bleed, it's true no one will ever love you more as I keep burying them under the floor you are always on my mind you are always on my mind tell me, how exactly you intend to get free ah, thanks, I didn't know until you told me you are always on my mind you are always on my mind 'trapped' is quite an emotive expression the straps are there just as a temporary lesson you are always on my mind you are always on my mind oh you unlocked the key to my heart I locked you up, true, that's not the romantic part your blue eyes make my knees unsteady you'll feel the same soon, I'll wait til you're ready no, we can't dance under the moon of love as there's ten tons of concrete above there's a reason the telly only has Swedish TV I want you to catch Stockholm Syndrome for me you are always on my mind you are always on my mind

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Date: 6/1/2024 4:19:00 PM
outstanding contest entry, Di11y. I thought the last three lines were spectacular and creative! best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 5/31/2024 6:54:00 AM
A powerful poem Dilly with very clever rhyme scheme interior and exterior in parts, the syndrome mentioned is very real, but obsession must set in first, seems like the captor has it here rather than the captive, the Swedish Tv and ten tons of concrete above is genius, gotta be a fave for innovative poetry and verse, cheers David
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Date: 5/31/2024 8:45:00 AM
It was a quick write last night after having chatted about Baby Reindeer :) didn't preempt a fave :) maybe I'll write more innovative poetry now I can't fall back on ekphrasis as I'm not premium anymore. Thank you :D
Date: 5/31/2024 1:05:00 AM
Impressed. The line *for me* change to "from me" and remove Stockholm. I'd love you to catch a syndrome from me. Songwriting is profitable.
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Date: 5/31/2024 1:27:00 AM
It's 'for me' as the captor - perhaps I should have said 'develop' to be more psychologically correct... I mean it's got winner written all over this one as long as there is no copyright on the words 'moon of love'

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